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Tara and Tess are the last two mouse-girls for sale at the local pet shop. Unbeknownst to them, they are about to be purchased by Vanessa, a human girl with a hungry pet snake as well as some vorish desires of her own.
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This is my shortest story. It's also the one that has thus far taken the longest to write. I had some personal things going on and it's just been sitting minimized on the taskbar for weeks... I finally finished it.
Normally I don't like human preds, but I thought that this particular scenario would be interesting.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
I would of loved to see more detail in stomach but the swallowing scene, the way the pred struggled was great.
I wonder if the snake might ever want to keep a feeder mouse as a pred and what would Van make of that.
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Posted by MasterMage13 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback!
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the reply, in the internet it is hard to gage reactions and tone.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
I meant pet. I also wonder what the snake Reggie would make of the woman eating a snake, they are kind of like noodles.
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