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Elevator 3 By feauxen -- Report

Two women have been living near each other and sharing an elevator twice a day. They don't know each other, not really, but they don't need to. Their relationship is about to get VERY intimate, very quickly.

I had a bit of an inspiration happen, and this is the third interpretation that came to mind, hence the number 3 in the title. I've already written the other two, and they've already been posted with exactly the names you'd expect.

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TableManners

Posted by TableManners 2 years ago Report

This was my favorite of the three - convincing your prey to go willingly is amazing

feauxen

Posted by feauxen 2 years ago Report

I enjoyed writing it for a very similar reason. The other two prey were willing, but they started out that way so there was none of that shift in attitude, the discovery of hidden desire born due to persuasiveness that I enjoy so much and find it so rarely. Having written it, though, I understand why it’d be rare. It’s much more complex and easy to mess up than garden-variety willingness or straight-up unwilling prey.

TableManners

Posted by TableManners 2 years ago Report

Yup, I'm right there with you - the shift in willingness is a delicate balance that makes it much harder to craft a story. Worth the effort though, IMO