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Part three.
Loving mother, ruthless predator and philosopher on the natural state of being; just a few of Evelyn's roles really. Aside from the rolls of fat along her sides of course.
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Posted by tgawsome 2 years ago Report
Another fine addition to the story.
The scene where Evelyn belches up the hiker's shoe is amazing, and the "trash pit," I'll call it, showing all the other items she's belched up, is a wonderful way to show her history of predation in the region.
Outside the fetish stuff, you do a wonderful job laying out Evelyn as a character and more than an eating machine. It's interesting to see how a predator like her sees the world and rationalizes what they do.
I'm also interested to see how this situation with the hunter turns out. This being a vore story hints at how it ends, but it's always nice to see the 'prey' in this situation acting intelligently. "There's a big hungry pred eating out people, so let's hire someone to take care of it." It's a refreshing bit of 'realism' I don't see often in vore writing.
Posted by IndigoImp 2 years ago Report
This is actually kinda sweet, in a tragic sort of way. I like it.
Posted by KingKryptic 2 years ago Report
Hahahaha. I'm glad you do! I've always wanted to blend in emotion in a vore story.