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The shrunk passengers wake up hoping it was all just a bad dream. Unfortunately (for them) it wasn't, and the woman that shrunk them wants to have some more fun with them.
It's taken me longer to finish this than I anticipated, but here it is. After a few revisions I think it's turned out pretty good, but any feedback is always appreciated (just don't be rude please).
I hope the next won't take as long, but maybe I write an unrelated story before the third part.
Hope you enjoy this one.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
I do like the Marco playing games with micro, does this Marco have a favorite.
What would happen if the protag attempted to save Mark.
Posted by EmptySodaCan 1 year ago Report
Lilly doesn't really have a favorite, this one' just been unlucky (although he might eventually get used to his position, who knows?).
An attempt to save Mark would've most likely failed, Clara was 100% not going to help and dragging an adult man through that kind of terrain is no easy feat.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
Thanks for the reply, I kind of hope Lilly does end up with a favorite, a scenario I always thought would of been fun is Marco playing the games with micros and than there micro who slowly becomes there favorite, fails or gives up in despair and the macro proceeds to bends the rules or decide f*** it they are a pet now.