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The second chapter is here! Ruby and Yang started their journey into Beacon Academy, with the redhead already having expensive meat for food~
As always, have a good read!
Posted by rileysue 1 year ago Report
Heck yeah ruby get them girls.
Posted by Hibben 1 year ago Report
Weiss will probably be less rude towards Ruby for becoming the leader than in canon after this experience. Least her pride leads to Ruby having to discipline her.
Posted by nico240 1 year ago Report
Hello egasd, I have a question. Will there be the next update of Vore Town or when will project s come out is a question that I have in my head
Posted by Santane 1 year ago Report
Yang: Ruby, friends OR food?
Ruby: Yes.
Posted by Goldendevil21 1 year ago Report
I actually like how this story did not just gloss over Ruby's defeat of the goons attacking the dust store. This makes the event feel like a big deal and gives credibility that Ozpin would be impressed by Ruby's skill. Even if she was unconventional.
Also liked the part Yang poked Ruby's flat belly. For one, felt like they are sisters and do tease each other. And second, love how Ruby's stomach is flat. Being a huntress is hard work and the story did mention how Ruby was cutting back on eating. Indicating that even predators can have an hourglass figure.
And yeah, just the little details of Yang rubbing Ruby's head while teasing her about being a glutton. Wish the actual story had more of these small character moments.
Also like the detail Ruby's stomach immediately started growling while being surrounded by others yet held her stomach and directly told herself, "Not now." Was that just Ruby holding her impulses in? Or would Ruby actually eat her fellow huntresses if she thought she could get away with it? Anyway, good scene.
And just love you keeping up the teasing of Ruby. Teasing Weiss inside her belly. Then later teasing Weiss when she was studying. And finally teasing Blake by opening up her maw over her head.
Posted by Superdoge645 1 year ago Report
Is it bad that i also really want a alternative where ruby doesn't let weiss out
Posted by SillyGoblinGuy 1 year ago Report
These stories are so good! I gotta catch up- Do you rp at all?
Posted by Egads 1 year ago Report
I mean, you are in the RP Logs folder, so the answer's yes lmao
Posted by SillyGoblinGuy 1 year ago Report
Oh- my bad! I didn't know it was an rp log, I just found it on the RWBY tag... You wanna rp sometime?
Posted by Egads 1 year ago Report
My PMs are open to discussion c: