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Honest feedback, but also be gentle with me. My first render ever >_<
People usually ask Daniel for a private show after his main performance. He's always glad to accept, taking all the customers to his hot and sticky VIP room.
There is also a textless version in my Twitter if you want to take a look ^^
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Posted by pendingdelet39h259b 1 year ago Report
Well i gotta say this looks great. Its gives both a nice and enticing view of Daniels mouth
Posted by NaughtyServant 1 year ago Report
Thanks you so very much for your opinion ^^
I hope you like this attempt of render mawshot I did
Posted by pendingdelet39h259b 1 year ago Report
I do indeed. I really like the how the saliva looks
Posted by NaughtyServant 1 year ago Report
I appreciate you say those words!
Saliva is hard and there are parts I'm not sure about it, but thanks for notice it ^^
Posted by Manilonzo22 1 year ago Report
I think for your first render ever it's a great start! You seems to have a good understanding of rendering shapes and how to transition from light to dark. :D
Some bit of constructive feedback, unless it is intentional (then disregard), the way there's that pink backlight that gives Daniel a glow, looks good in some areas, but some I'm noticing like the mouth area may be unnecessary.
Overall, you should feel proud and keep practicing to improve!
Posted by NaughtyServant 1 year ago Report
Thanks for consider it's a good render even for a first try. Yeah, I think I did something with the one at the end.
It's hard to say what ares in specific you mean, but I'll keep it in mind for a future try.
Thanks for say that kind of words <3
Posted by Manilonzo22 1 year ago Report
No problem! If you needed the specific areas I mean the one mouth crease on the left side of the drawing. The one closest to the jaw. As well as the crease/line on his neck also on the left side :D
Hope this helps! <3
Posted by Flashsnack 1 year ago Report
Looks amazing
Posted by NaughtyServant 1 year ago Report
Thanks you. I appreciate your comment here <3
Posted by merlovinit 1 year ago Report
ooh it looks so good! ^^
Posted by NaughtyServant 1 year ago Report
Thanks you so very much!
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 1 year ago Report
Hot, sticky, slimy and cramped... My kind of VIP room <3
Posted by NaughtyServant 1 year ago Report
Very accurate words to describe his hungry mouth and tongue hahaha
Thanks for your comment!
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 1 year ago Report
I hope his stomach is just more of all of those things! <3
Posted by NaughtyServant 1 year ago Report
Oh yeah, for sure. That all just in a factor of x1000
hahahaha
Posted by brandon14 1 year ago Report
I call shotgun.