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The Awakening of Forbidden Desires (Part 1) By GarudaMaster -- Report

Hi, it's my first post on this site. I've decided to write a story where a Slime infiltrates the Grand Narukami Shrine and absorbs Yae Miko.

I'm open to constructive criticism to improve my storytelling.
If you notice any missing tags, feel free to suggest them for addition. Your input is always appreciated.
I apologize if my English is poor.

Art is by: summer
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/96512771

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DoeXJohn

Posted by DoeXJohn 1 year ago Report

This was a fantastic read! Yae Miko as prey and highlighting her best feature really stole the show for me. The slime must be blessed by her generosity ^^

GarudaMaster

Posted by GarudaMaster 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I always saw Yae Miko as a willing prey open to new experiences.

DoeXJohn

Posted by DoeXJohn 1 year ago Report

same honestly! most of the work I've had done of her centers around diving into maws for fun haha

Voshine

Posted by Voshine 1 year ago Report

I also have a slime story in mind >=)
Nice job, though from personal experience, i heavily recommend switching your format to docx instead of pdf. Many phone users are put off by having to download the file first.

GarudaMaster

Posted by GarudaMaster 1 year ago Report

Thanks!
Honestly, I don't know how to do it either, lol. And thank you for the advice.

Voshine

Posted by Voshine 1 year ago Report

There should be plenty of online converters out there, if you are on pc/mobile you can just use Microsoft word/office from the get go!

GarudaMaster

Posted by GarudaMaster 1 year ago Report

Thank you very much for the recommendation. Now I was able to change the format

gtgod

Posted by gtgod 1 year ago Report

Great story!
I love how she gave herself willingly

gtgod

Posted by gtgod 1 year ago Report

Looking forward to reading the next part

GarudaMaster

Posted by GarudaMaster 1 year ago Report

Thanks, I always visualized Yae as a willing prey. About the next part...It will take a bit more because I don't really have much time to write stories and also because I started a new one of one part only

mikkken

Posted by mikkken 6 months ago Report

Best match!

mikkken

Posted by mikkken 4 months ago Report

Looking forward to reading the next part