Posted by pleasedonteatmealice28 1 year ago Report

I liked it, it isn't the first time I read about vore slide in a waterpark, but was funny for me. I hope more stories on the way :D

Posted by ewulumer 1 year ago Report

Thank you very much! I definitely plan on writing more of them.

Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

Original, well written, layout is mobil friendly, everything about this story is great!

Posted by ewulumer 1 year ago Report

Thank you so much! Someone recently asked on the forums what is the best file format for stories and the answer was RTF precisely because it can be read on phones easily.

Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

Omg, I been struggling with Docx, I'll try this out!

Posted by JackSpades 1 year ago Report

While the ending is not in my wheelhouse, it was a good read nonetheless. I especially like you breaking the common trope of the pred taking the prey's burped up clothes. A refreshing jab in the end :3

Posted by ewulumer 1 year ago Report

Big thanks! While I do enjoy this part of the process I don't think I will necessarily including it in every story. Also what's up with the pred always taking the prey's clothes? xD

Posted by JackSpades 1 year ago Report

You're gonna write stories without digestion?

No idea either, probably adds to the humiliation factor^^

Posted by ewulumer 1 year ago Report

I think digestion will always be implied in the very least though in my stories. I may just decide to leave it up to the imagination of the reader.

Posted by Bright 1 year ago Report

Always enjoy predators at the waterpark.

Posted by Dogsdaddy 1 year ago Report

Baby Fat Deep End

Posted by ewulumer 1 year ago Report

Now that you mention it, yes, this story is unintentionally very similar to one of the routes you can choose in that game.