Posted by LustfulHeart 1 year ago Report

Really want a reversal for this one too, but it was never a fair chance. Nikki had too much power and virtually no potential consequences for her actions, as she heartlessly spelled out. If not because of her father seeing her as doing no wrong, judging by her brother's reaction, then so her actions wouldn't reflect badly on the law firm if they became public. Even when caught after the fact, she only got a slap on the wrist and a warning that she's definitely going to ignore.

Only way that any form of reprisal could be obtained is if Jen ate her in retaliation after waking up. And even then, Cassie would still be dead. Unless Jen could somehow *make* Nikki barf her up before or after the throat-fucking she endured - assuming she was still conscious. And there's Cassie being digested during the process to take into account since Nikki was in no rush. Unless Jen had enough experience to turn the tide and get on top of Nikki to control the pace and make her burst sooner.

The only way for both to survive would be forced regurgitation (or Jen arriving just a moment earlier and not freezing) and vigilante justice if it results in Nikki threatening to ruin Jen if she doesn't turn Cassie back to her. And unless Nikki is *that* disliked by her own family, eating her would have its own consequences.

Posted by voregeek20 1 year ago Report

Yeah, I don't think I could do a good ending for this one. The most you'd get is a different kind of tragic. The idea that Nikki is this unassailable force is too core to the story.

Posted by LustfulHeart 1 year ago Report

Pity. And even if Jen *did* stay conscious after nearly choking to death, it's abundantly clear that Nikki never had any intention of holding up her end of the bargain. Hell, bargain isn't even the right word - she just did it to take Jen's dignity along with her daughter before eating her too, because she could. At least Nora had a semi-fair chance in the last story and her father actually followed through on the wager made.

If not a good ending here, maybe a loosely connected sequel where - against all odds - Nikki meets a bigger fish and finds out that she's not as untouchable as she thought. Either a more prestigious rival or a more criminal/covert element that doesn't care about how much power she wields, government would be a viable source in either case.

Honestly, I just want Nikki to pay. Whether treated as food like she did so many others by a passerby who doesn't care of her status, or if the family members of her many victims take their revenge through collectively paying a more powerful law firm or vigilante justice. Nikki going through even a fraction of the pain she inflicted so callously would be cathartic to read.

Still, it's your call to make. I'm only offering/venting ideas.

Posted by Raesetsu 1 year ago Report

I'm really happy to see more futa preds dominating with graphic digestion. It's criminally underutilized on this site. And the way you wrote her? With how cruel she was? Perfect.

Posted by voregeek20 1 year ago Report

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

Posted by Raesetsu 1 year ago Report

I loved it! I just wish you went into a little more detail on how she was progressing through Nikki's bowels, and gotten the mom involved lol. That would have been fucking epic. Although you seemed to have ended it extremely well, I'm honestly just excited to see another futa pred writer other than vesari. :D

Posted by Fairy 1 year ago Report

I absolutely love seeing how much of a hard time that prey had! Nothing better than breaking a prey's will along with absolutely everything else~ Also, that scene where the mother entered the office just to see her daughter's leg's slide down the pred's throat was super good :)

Posted by voregeek20 1 year ago Report

Thank you! That scene was one of the first parts of the original idea. It was actually going to be all that you'd see of Cassie being swallowed, as I wanted that to be the "hook" to the story, but I ended up wanting to revisit it when writing. Which is why I settled on writing this with the shifting viewpoints hoping to get the best of both worlds.

Posted by Kelly 1 month ago Report

This story bangs