Happy Vore Day, all! I ended up running a bit behind schedule due to a mix of this just...Being a really fucking long story, and also, getting distracted by video games. There was a sale for Hot Wheels Unleashed, so I grabbed that, then I picked up Pseudoregalia (7/10, good shmoovement but the combat and presentation need some work, goat girl is very hot though) and Sigil (Si6il? Si666il? Gigachad John Romero's new episode for Doom, though I'm stuck on E5M7).

So, the fact I got something this long done in basically a week of work even with distractions? Credit where it's due, even if I'm late.

Anywho! For Vore Day, I decided it would be an opportune time to introduce a new, villainous OC. So, meet Iliyana Kopanisti! A villainous, leather-clad inquisitor, who is also a permanently hungry blonde, and is entirely unapologetic about making it everyone else's problem. (clinko if you see this its not what it looks like i diDNT MEAN IT DONT HURT ME)

I've been brainrotting over her for a while, initially coming up with her basic concept fucking around on character.ai, kind of falling in love with the idea of a paladin/champion who really loves her Goddess. I hammered out her proper name, got vague ideas for her design on certain unspeakable places (I plan on getting a proper, human-made reference soon!), and churned out lore ideas to make her a proper threat.

While I do also have Kazukazu, he is, as one might already be aware, a joke character; a parody that I need to work on more and refine, so he's more of a light-hearted joke than a mean-spirited jab.

But Iliyana here, I really wanted to put her over as a serious threat - so, admittedly kind of inadvertently, I kind of gave her a similar set-up that Beatrice had in her debut story: Six opponents, all fairly threatening and able to do some damage, but ultimately falling prey to the big, hungry blonde. I mulled over what the party composition ought to be for longer than I care to admit, and ultimately used another centaur and kind-of-angel again (if aasimars count?), but I think it worked out. I think I still need work on fight scenes, but here, I think I did fine with making it appear back-and-forth while showing they never really had a chance.

They were dead the second they stepped onto her island. She just gave them time to realize it.

Anyway, I hope you all enjoy~!

Points for guessing some of the funny boomer shooter weapons I threw in, because I'm on a kick with those.

Kreata was created by and belongs to  Renael. She is not a crossover character; Ren made her to be Iliyana's SIMP.

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