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Moving in with a Predator (Chapter 7) By Vesari -- Report

Aunt Vicky finally arrives. But things aren't quite as easy as they might seem...

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The last part of the "Becky's Game" arc. She's a fun character, and one I'm looking forward to using in the future, since I have a lot of ideas as to where this series might go. Next, I think we're going to look more at Vicky and Chris.

This week on Patreon, the alternate ending to "Chastity's Reward" is now available. This time, Millie's fate is a little different, and possibly a little more... 'canon', let's say. You can read it early now here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/87590523

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Dongers

Posted by Dongers 1 year ago Report

Phenomenal work there! You really know how to write tension!

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AliceXVI

Posted by AliceXVI 1 year ago Report

Im so relieved. Id have been heartbroken if this ended in disaster

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AliceXVI

Posted by AliceXVI 1 year ago Report

Im glad this chapter gave us some respite. I love the pit of my stomach dread feeling the last 2 chapters gave but it can only go so far before it starts actually making me depressed and this series skirted right up to that limit then gave us this positive outcome.

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EuritheSnek

Posted by EuritheSnek 1 year ago Report

Mmm, Seeing Becky squirm made it all worth it. I hope we get to see Chris, Kit, and Di all have a good "welcome back to life" party. I think Kit might end up in Chris' or Di's gut at least once. preferably in a way that let the two outside have plenty of fun. Ahhh, I love it. Youre work is always ready to deliver it ways that really make me squirm from head to tail tip. Excellent work.

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report

This was a epic story. I am also hoping Becca, endos/reforms Chris at some point.

I also noticed V never said she did not deliberately did not reform people.

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mmcalpine1988

Posted by mmcalpine1988 1 year ago Report

I cant wait to see if the aunt and niece have sex next chapter

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feauxen

Posted by feauxen 1 year ago Report

"Never failed to reform on purpose," huh? While I'm sure that did its job of successfully reassuring Chris it also leaves a lot of room for interpretation, doesn't it. To me, all it really seems to be saying is that when Vicky eats someone for keeps she doesn't use Becky's bullshit to dodge the law, preferring her own methods. For example, you didn't "fail to reform someone on purpose" if you never pretended you were going to reform them, now did you? You can't fail to reform someone you weren't trying to reform in the first place, after all.

That does raise the question of how Vicky got away with such a thing...but that hardly even seems worth asking. A woman of her talents, with her connections? I can think of more than one way she'd get away with it, and some of them are even legal!

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Sira

Posted by Sira 1 year ago Report

I want everyone to fuck each other now.

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voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 1 year ago Report

Aunt Vicky to the rescue letssss goooo! Loved the chapter as always and can’t wait for the next :)

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