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While Remi was being carried off to the baths by the Princess's, the Queen had the Hero all to herself. What is her plan? Will the Hero be able to escape her clutches? Read to find out!
This is the continuation of a prior story which you can find over here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/915996
New Job is eating up a lot of my time, but I write when I can. Tried a lot of new stuff with this one, as well as a little old stuff. Trying my hand at an unbirth story, it's been a while, and I really like how it came out. Hope ya'll think so too!
As always, thoughts and comments are appreciated and credit to novel AI for the thumbnail and help in writing the story.
Link to my Deviant Art: https://www.deviantart.com/superspecialzanzma
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Posted by Cynder13 1 year ago Report
So I quite like this series and I love how dominant the queen was
Posted by cheeseandmango 1 year ago Report
Thanks, i didnt plan on making her a reoccurring character, but i really liked writing her. Might just bring her back~
Glad you liked her!
Posted by Cynder13 1 year ago Report
Well sweet
And she won’t be happy over what Remi did to her daughters at all
So is the hero dead by the way
Posted by cheeseandmango 1 year ago Report
Well the Hero is currently trapped in the Queen's womb. Nothing bad has happened to him... yet...
I dont want to give too much away, but she isn't going to be dominating Remi. I do intend on having her dominate other people though.
Posted by Cynder13 1 year ago Report
Well that’s interesting although it seems weird she won’t dominate remi after what he did to her daughters unless she didn’t care about them at all
Posted by cheeseandmango 1 year ago Report
Well lets just say Remi gets the Jump on her and absorbs her. She wont be gone though. Remi can take on the appearance and personalities of people he assimilates, so the "queen" can still go around dominate people. She'll just be doing so in accordance to Remi's ambitions and desires.
Posted by Cynder13 1 year ago Report
And Remi does desire the hero so
Also will the queen sorta dominate Remi since her being in him might override him as well
Posted by cheeseandmango 1 year ago Report
Well, they kinda want similar things, so them infighting shouldn't be a problem. Her personality is pretty strong though, so her taking over would'nt be out of the question if they do have a disagreement.
Posted by Cynder13 1 year ago Report
So is the queen going to be upset about her daughters at all
Posted by cheeseandmango 1 year ago Report
Well, under normal circumstances, she most certainly would. However, lets just say, Remi has the ability to make people "change" their minds. He can be quite persuasive.