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Are you ready for another DreamEater Story?

Of course you are! Well this one features a young student of Dream State University as she strolls within the adjacent park area near dusk. Without having any friends that participate in regular exercise, she has developed the habit of going alone. Admittedly, Ava realizes that this behavior is a bit unsafe, but she has relaxed after indulging in this risky activity for months, now. She has always enjoyed late evening strolls within the normally safe area, but unfortunately for her, Natasha is on the prowl tonight...

This story features Natasha which is one of the first predators that have appeared within my stories. If you want to read more stories featuring her check out the links below!

The Tease: https://aryion.com/g4/view/853930

Natasha Teases a Snack:https://aryion.com/g4/view/886913

Hungry Mean Girls <3:https://aryion.com/g4/view/916676

Also, I attempted a lot of different things with this story to work on improving my writing skills a bit. I changed a good bit of the coloring scheme and formatting as well as attempted to write in a first person format. Let me know what you think!

This story features some new characters I've been planning to write on for a while! I hope you enjoy them! Let me know which one is your favorite!

As usual, if you rock with me, please, please, please leave a comment and hit that watch button!

You guys are awesome and your many interactions and insights with my work keeps me writing free of charge!

Also watch me on DeviantArt, if you want more DreamEater content that's not posted here!

My Deviant Art: https://www.deviantart.com/dreameater-at-da

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idevourflesh

Posted by idevourflesh 1 year ago Report

I feel like this one was a lot darker than your other stories. Maybe something about the phrasing of the words?

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

I believe it’s because it’s written in first person. Makes everything seem a lot personal~

Segundoetapa

Posted by Segundoetapa 1 year ago Report

Loved the POV ~ can’t wait till Natasha meets her match though >:)

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I really tried to highlight her…personality with this one~

infinitegest

Posted by infinitegest 1 year ago Report

hoghhhhhhhhhh this is very, very good.
love the pursuit, the hunger, the playfulness... i especially love the passages that personify her belly a bit, how eagerly it sets about doing it's job and the bliss it derives from churning meals away. like she and her belly are partners in crime.

infinitegest

Posted by infinitegest 1 year ago Report

the glee she gets from gulping down someone she knows, someone who helped her... ughhhhhhhhhh i'm imploding

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Haha! I’m glad you enjoyed it. -and I’m also glad you recognized that there were three entities within this story instead of two

infinitegest

Posted by infinitegest 1 year ago Report

yesssss making the belly itself a character is so underdone and you hit that note just right!

also the way you describe the warm tingling the pred experiences as they start fattening up, immediately rewarding their gluttony is unique and so, SO hot. it's delicious in circumstances where the pred feels reluctant and guilty, like in Mina's Accidental Meal, and the fattening is both pleasurable and a horrifying reminder of what their body has done to another living person. and then, in circumstances like this where the pred is just revelling in it... unffff <3

infinitegest

Posted by infinitegest 1 year ago Report

my two main kinks are vore and pregnancy, and honestly the idea that the body has its own desires and goals, independent of what the PERSON wants, is so so good in both cases.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Well I’m glad you enjoyed it! I’m a big fan of personification myself and I like to draw a contrast between what the individual wants and what the predatory instinct desires~

Metrolix

Posted by Metrolix 1 year ago Report

Love the dynamic on this one! It gives me the chills! Nice work, fam

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed it!