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No Majesty for the Machine, Ch. 1 By alittletrolling -- Report

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Oh my god. I wont lie, this one was actually really hard to get done.

This story was extremely self indulgent, but for a different reason. You see, I love cars. I'm an extreme fan of several motorsports, and I just think they're awesome. Meanwhile, I've had this story idea in my head for almost a year now, so I decided to just combine the two.

Meanwhile, there isn't much vore or sex in this story, this one is mainly worldbuilding. There is a lot to build. The second half will feature... something along those lines though, don't worry.

Also, this features a cameo of KC and Nat, who are OC's of my buddy  KC105 ! Give them some love!

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reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 1 year ago Report

Desmond is gonna be a hard sell for me. I like the detail you go into with this story, but it creates a little barrier to entry if you don't know certain terms about cars.

Im looking forward to seeing a bit more of this.

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Yeah, I knew making a character who was essentially just an asshole car nerd wouldn't be an exactly popular story, but in my next part especially there will be vore and stuff, and it'll be less focused. Like said, I have had this story planned for quite a while, so just bear with me haha

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 1 year ago Report

The car nerd, Im down with. Having something to distinguish and guide your character's action is nice to have. It's merely the blatantly hostile nature of his character rubbed me wrong. So im curious how you're gonna work with Desmond.

Very much looking forward to this.

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Oh don't worry. That'll ALL be adressed in the second chapter.

Kasra

Posted by Kasra 1 year ago Report

Oh, I can definitely see your love of cars in this. It does give Desmond a pretty strong personality!

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Haha yea, I spend a shit ton on attending motorsport events. And yes, he's the most potent personality I've thought up, i figured it should be that way if I finally decided to pull out a male Solo lead character.

Glad you enjoyed!