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No Majesty for the Machine, Ch. 2 By alittletrolling -- Report

WARNING: CONTAINS OBJECT VORE AND BODY HORROR.

WOW. this was hard as FUCK to write. What a rollercoaster this was! From almost giving up writing to take a break to suddenly completing half of the story in one night, this was certainly a fun write!

It still has a hell of a lot of complex bits to it though. Writing a male lead was hard, writing object vore was hard, writing other characters were hard, i'm definitely tired.

But anyway, thanks for reading!

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burgerandfly

Posted by burgerandfly 1 year ago Report

Fantastic story! Loved the object vore, the descriptions were detailed and the story flowed really smoothly.

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Thank you very much!

VexerHoodie

Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report

-potential spoilers pls read before-

Finally got the time to read this two-parter. I didn’t think there was a way to top the venture of Paul and Nerva but this really showed your best strides. Desmond was such an interesting racc to follow. His pains and downfalls—and your definite interest in vehicles and their scenes really shine here. As a reader you really pulled all my attention to the very last latter. I’m still captivated by the mysterious stranger and his role in all this. Thanks for sharing this!

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Thanks so much! Glad I at least seem like I know what I'm talking about when I bring up cars, haha! Desmond was a tough character to write, I essentially wanted "The biggest asshole ever but with some dark, sad secrets." And this character WILL reappear, don't worry.

Sorry for not uploading in a bit either, shit has it really been a month? Man, college is really fucking me in the ass. Hopefully soon, the story I'm cooking up right now is pretty sweet too, don't you worry!

VexerHoodie

Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report

He was such a grump, I loved it!
Can’t wait to see more of this world and how it’s changed since the riots. Best of luck with your studies!

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Oh boy, they're coming. I have PLANS. i have SO MANY PLANS but I cant reveal them because the haters will sabotage me. I have PLANS but i cant show them because the haters will sabotage me.

VexerHoodie

Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report

lol that's a good reference. You must really have some stuff in the works!

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

I do! I just wanna get it out and not be in college and just WRITE ALL DAY AUUUGH im literally putting off a midterm to write ive done it this whole day and I am CHUGGING ALONG on my writing

what the hell is wrong with me???

VexerHoodie

Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report

Ah, good ol midterms. I don't miss those one bit. Our brains just want to do the fun stuff. Nothing else to it but to do it.

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Yes, but...

Why do i specifically do better at writing when im putting off another task I have at hand? THAT'S the kicker!

VexerHoodie

Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report

Heh, I can never figure out that either. Some sort of executive malfunction? The brain is such a complicated mush of matter.

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Like I just finished a midterm and a bunch more assignments and i told myself "now i have more time to write!"

2 hours of youtube watching later, im ready to fight someone.

VexerHoodie

Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report

Agh, youtube. That can be a real hook. I stopped looking at youtube since my adblocker got circumscribed this week

Maybe it’s executive dysfunction, or maybe you are starting to realize you were born to be a fighter. A Street Fighter. A Mortal Kombat kombatant. An mma bastard.. That’s really into cars. It could also be that you are over-stressed. This part of the year is very hard for undergraduates/college goers. You can do it

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Shiit yeah my first year as a college student, i dont know if 6 classes my first semester was a good idea.

Oh well! You live and you learn! Id be writing right now if i wasnt doing homework but WHATEVER ILL BE FINE ILL BE FINE ILL BE FINE I HAVENT UPLOADED IN A MONTH BUT ILL BE FINE ILL BE FINE FINE FINE!

VexerHoodie

Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report

Yup, live and learn! You will get into the groove! It’s taking a lot but your education will do you wonders! Shame it comes at the cost of your free-time and fiction writing. You’ll find a balance between the studies, life, yt and social medias. I know it!

alittletrolling

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Haha thanks! Like said, this IS the first semester of school. I'm confident nect semester will be easier. Also, next YEAR will be different too, so lets see how it all goes!

Anyway i really wanna write more, but i just took on another project... ugh...