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Procrastination is a killer.
Here's my first piece of writing. Funnily enough, it got way more sadistic than I usually like. Do tell me where I screwed up, and I might go back later and fix the edit.
Also, it's very long. Will get to the point next time.
And the pic is by the wonderful sonier103. Link to his page: https://aryion.com/g4/user/thesonier103
He's awesome, go give him a look.
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Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
Nicely done . Although this does make them both seems out of character more so with Fiona being callous and cruel willing to kill someone just to ssate her hunger . however the fairy godmother being more of a sadistic power hungry crime lord rather than a power hungry and over bearing mother . It’s still a good story
Posted by parentalcontrol97A 1 year ago Report
Yeah, I did depart a lot with her character from the established material. It made sense with how Fairy was behaving.