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Haha, what an original title! But seriously, I've been reading Nagatoro and LOVE the series (at least, the first four volumes, I've kinda lost interest after the art prez was introduced... I personally feel the manga should have ended with the two dorks kissing and starting to date at the fire works festival, but whateva...), and wanted to do an... alternative outcome when the pair first meet... and in this case, one of them certainly does m(eat) :3c
Look, I love Nagatoro, but she is a BIG brat, and brats need to be corrected!... Or eaten, like in the story.
Look, I'm starting to ramble a LOT! I think Senpai is hot, and he doesn't get a lot of love, so here this is... he'll probably get another story where he eats her friends, because they are WAY worse than Nagatoro... But knowing my track record when it comes to sequels, we'll see ;) (I hope to, but don't hold your breath that it'll be SUPER soon. I have like, a year+ of ideas I wanna do as well.)
ANWAY!! ENJOY!!!
Posted by Skooldred 1 year ago Report
Damn this is hot as fuck~ Senpai eating Nagatoro is definitely one of my favorite vore pairings I mean she just looks so tasty and Senpai is just such a cutie~ and cute boys should always eat the tasty girls especially the best ones.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
REALLY glad to hear it was a hot read! HELL YEAH! LOVE Senpai as pred and Nagatoro as prey! They are SUCH a fun pairing, and as I've fallen in love with the series, it's grown to be SUPER up there. She may be a dom in terms of how she acts, but even if she doesn't want to be, she's MEANT to be a TOTAL gutslut! Senpai IS such a god damn cutie, LOVE him... REALLY wish he got more porn, ESPECIALLY vore... Which I DO hope to help fix! Cute boys should ALWAYS eat and digest the cute best girls, and add em to their BETTER body!~
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Posted by Skooldred 1 year ago Report
There's nothing better than a big boy butt made of cute tasty girls~ I really do hope that you do more with Nagatoro or at least Senpai because he's just the best boy. Seeing him reunite Nagatoro with her friends or maybe her sister would be peak. Prez would also make a great meal though, she's not eaten anywhere near enough and look at all that meat on her she's made to be boy food fr.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
Truuue, frigging facts right there! The kinda butt that DOES NOT fit into his pants! I'm definitely hoping to do more in the future! I DO have a fair few ideas! Senpai will for sure get another story sooometime soon! Maybe Nagatoro will bully him into eating a random girl... who knows haha, but yeah, I do want to do so :)
Yeah, that definitely would be! LOTS of tasty girls that he can eat... Or I could play around with his daydream where she's the Demon Lord, perhaps?
As for the Prez, I'll definitely consider it, if I decide to read more of the manga. I do agree that she's definitely meant to be boy food though ;)
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Posted by Skooldred 1 year ago Report
I mean Pants are for losers anyway and Senpai would look so much cuter without them. That random girl would be so lucky to end up in Senpais gut though and I can just picture Nagatoro giving some forcedfull belly rubs and squeezes as Senpai belches up a storm his face bright red.
Oooh~ yes that does sound interesting the valiant hero putting away the evil demon lord in a place where she'll never be able to cause problems again...his hips and in a chamber pot well she's probably still giving him problems with his wardrobe but those are the sacrifices a hero must make for the greater good.
Really speaking all girls are meant to be boy food at the end of the day I mean why else would they look and smell so tasty? It just doesn't make sense to not eat them in my opinion.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
Too true! Nothing but underwear (if even that, but I love underwear tightly on FAT asses, so yes) is PEAK on a pred's posterior...
Heh, sure, she totally would think so ;) But really, I love the thought of him just sobbing, sniffling, and swallowing the girl as Nagatoro bullies and harasses him to do so... Yesss, that's good, her rubbing harder and harder... Then belching in her face, causing her to have one of her characteristic freak outs as she hits him with slaps...
Heh, she's literally meant to be swallowed in that latex-looking outfit of hers... plus, you get the bonus of slurping up her tail!
Girls are food, period. Even pred girls will eventually be eaten by boys. I don't make the rules, I just enforce them.
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Posted by Skooldred 1 year ago Report
A tight pair of underwear that's ripping and tearing along the seams as it tries valiantly to hold back the onslaught of boy fat...who knows who long until it just gives up the ghost and lets all that plush out to bounce and jiggle away.
And as she slaps his belly freaking out he burps again even harder causing a pair of partly digested panties to shoot into her face causing her to freak out even harder.
Latex outfits are such peak they're the best kind of wrapping paper~ and tails are simply meant to be slurped like noodles the perfect way to cap off a nice meaty meal then with a simple long slurp.
Pred Girls? Oh you mean extra meaty boy food. Those are great especially the smug ones who think that they're on the top of the food chain until a hungry boy puts them in their proper place.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
Big agreeee to all that has been said here... VERY big agree all around...
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Posted by Skooldred 1 year ago Report
It's nice to talk with someone who agrees with tastes and likes the same series I do... I'd ask for your discord but that's probably weird lol either way this was quite the fun conversation and I do look forward to any and every story of yours.
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Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I like the idea of a twist on that idea. Nagatoro knows that Senpai can eat girls, but he isn't doing it. So she bullies, harasses, and teases him to try to get him to eat another girl, because she finds the idea of him eating a girl to be sexy. Senpai gets tired of it and eats her instead. Nagatoro wouldn't be pleased about this and give him a stomachache.
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Posted by CheyCafe 1 year ago Report
Nagatoro's a cute series! Sad you lost interest after prez, she's my favorite and there's not enough content of her getting churned. Really nice story as usual tho, love the gruesomeness you bring to the table~
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
It really is a cute series! Yeah, I'm bummed too, but to be honest? I'm VERY picky about new characters being introduced in series like this. I get kinda thrown off, and it's gonna sound a bit dumb, but get uncomfy when dynamics are thrown off (I guess it reminds me a bit too much of real life?). I'm glad you enjoy the prez though! And hey, tell you what: IF I do continue to read the series past volume 4, I'll write something with Senpai churning her ;) (Or Nagatoro, one of the two).
Thank you though!!! I'm very glad to hear the story was good, and that you enjoyed the MEAN gruesome stuff! X3 Really makes my day to hear!
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Posted by CheyCafe 1 year ago Report
Fair enough! I just love my big tiddy kuudere types with a fervent passion. The fact she has zero shame and just displays herself with a cold expression on her face is adorable to me. It's definitely a weird quirk about myself, I just love that blank expression that's common with kuuderes. I have a hard time explaining the appeal.
Most people also place those types as preds cuz they think someone cold like that is best digesting others. But I like them as prey because it puts them in an opportunity to see how they're really like. Will they sit there and stew? Or will their cold exterior dissolve and they start screaming like anyone else?
Apologies, went a lil off-topic but I would love it if that were to happen. Unfortunately she's.... really not that prominent anyways (or I guess that would be fortunate in your case). I'd elaborate but I wouldn't wanna spoil you. I will say I don't think she upsets the dynamic between the main duo too much, but rather tests it.
I'm glad you enjoy comments, I'm always worried about saying too much or the wrong thing cuz I'm a bit of a motormouth(or moterfingers, I guess?) as you can see.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
Totally fair as well! I can totally understand why you (and of course, others) do like her. Maybe given time I'll enjoy her or the like. Hey, you explained the appeal well, don't worry!
True, yeah I see people enjoy em as preds a lot for that reason, but I REALLY like your reasoning for them as prey. It's a delicious roulette of how the prey will react!
Again, no apologies needed! Hey, I'll give the rest of the series a shot, especially if that's the case. I really like the series a lot, and love the main dynamic between Naoto and Nagatoro, so I'll probably continue. I will however, stand by the fact that I think the series would have ended perfectly at the fire works festival, if not a bit cliche (in a good way.)
Oh I love comments! Nah, nah, having conversations, ESPECIALLY about stuff I enjoy/am passionate about/others are passionate about make me happy!!
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Posted by CheyCafe 1 year ago Report
Yeah, sometimes less is more when it comes to stories and it's fair to feel something has overstayed its welcome.
But yes, some of my favourite waifus of all time are kuuderes who I definitely want to see more prey content for some day. (Namely Ethel from Xenoblade 3 and Akame from Akame Ga Kill) I enjoy writing a fair bit myself but have never had the confidence to create a full piece to post to the public.
I definitely admire your, and many others', bravery when it comes to putting stuff out there! I hope someday I'll publish works of my own! They would definitely have a similarly cruel vibe as the ones you write, as that is definitely a highlight for me of vore!
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Posted by HangryWriter25 1 year ago Report
Damn, this is some hot stuff.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
Really glad to hear it! :)
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Posted by HangryWriter25 1 year ago Report
Has to be the second time I've seen this dynamic (well mostly since I had written a story with the scenario in mind), but Naoto needs more love. He's a cute pred.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
Damn right he needs LOTS more love! He really is a cute pred, and I hope to definitely do more with him! Oh dang, that's awesome to hear that you did a fic with the idea as well!!
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Posted by HangryWriter25 1 year ago Report
Yeah, an old story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/700029. Though be warned, this one does have disposal in it.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
Haha, I love disposal! But thank you for the warning just in case :) I'll give it a read when I have a moment! Thanks for linking! AND of course adding to Senpai superiority!
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Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I think Nagatoro makes GREAT prey. I am somewhat surprised that there aren't more stories where Senpai eats her. Perhaps it is the age of the character, or that m/f vore is less popular. I think that she would make a great teasing tsundere "gutslut" that tries to tease Naoto into eating her without admitting that she wants to be eaten.
Anyways, thank you for writing this.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
I agree, she REALLY does. I'm surprised and saddened too, but I think it's more so due to the m/f aspect, actually, considering most people tend to ignore their ages and do stuff with em regardless.
Yeah, I could see that! Maybe something I'll consider for the future, even if willing isn't HIGH on my priorities list. Still a fun idea!
And thank you for enjoying and reading it!! Means a lot :)
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Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
M/f vore is my favorite gender paring, and I like the idea of Senpai discovering how tasty girls are by eating Nagatoro. Reading about her getting eaten is fun, since it throws off her dom nature. It is hard to be a dom from inside a stomach, but maybe she could upset it.
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Posted by radmann 1 year ago Report
It's one of my favorites as well, definitely tied with f/f for sure, because GOSH I love male preds... Hehehe, yeah, I like the idea too... especially with how tasty the other girls definitely must be! Mmm, yeah, exactly! Her going from dom to digested is delicious...
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Posted by Bigenjoyer 1 year ago Report
Absolutely love this, there is something really cursed about senpai being a pred, but that makes it even hotter
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Posted by radmann 3 months ago Report
While I know this is over a year late (which I am SO sorry about, Eka's somehow didn't let me know I got this comment until I saw another comment was made ;-;), I just want to say 'thank you' so so much!!! And hehehehehe, he's just meant to be it, fr fr
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Posted by maxiemonster 3 months ago Report
senpai IS hot! mousy nerdy guys make for really interesting preds :3 this was a really fun read
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Posted by radmann 3 months ago Report
He is SO frigging hot! For sure! They make amazing preds, and I am SO happy to hear you enjoyed reading it!!
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