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Visiting The Fiance's Family By immortalsane -- Report

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Chris isn't sure what to expect when he goes to visit his fiance's farm. It's sink or swim when they reveal their secrets, and well...when in Rome...

Commission for the fabulously patient  Clancy688

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clancy688

Posted by clancy688 1 year ago Report

This was brilliant! Thanks a lot, this is going to be a fun universe to explore. :3

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immortalsane

Posted by immortalsane 1 year ago Report

Thanks for commissioning it!

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hyhyd

Posted by hyhyd 1 year ago Report

Do you plan on making art references for these characters?

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unicorn

Posted by unicorn 1 year ago Report

Wow, what an amazing concept!

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immortalsane

Posted by immortalsane 1 year ago Report

Ye, it was a lot of fun to do some worldbuilding again! More of this to come!

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EtherRealty

Posted by EtherRealty 1 year ago Report

Man, that was a heck of a trip! Love all the world building and the normalcy of something so bizarre. then again that's pretty much one of my favorite things, especially when experienced through the eyes of a newcomer to the experience(s). Makes me wonder if the Circle can make people into creatures that don't actually exist, or if it's restricted to the realms of reality.

It's not often I go into a story for wank material and come out dry but enthralled regardless. I hope we get to see more of this world! :D

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immortalsane

Posted by immortalsane 1 year ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed it, I had a lot of fun fleshing out this world. There is definitely more to come in this world, and (spoiler) yes, the circle can do mythical beings!

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EtherRealty

Posted by EtherRealty 1 year ago Report

Oooooooh, so... cna it do, like... furries? Maybe even furries with extra bits? Turn grandma into a curvy 3-boobed bunny girl with a huge wang? o3o

Like, as a possibility I mean, not like... that's what'll happen in the story. >.>

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immortalsane

Posted by immortalsane 1 year ago Report

It can indeed do furries, and it can indeed do multi. There's stories coming up that feature both! Also, this is an open world, that is, you can commission stories of your own with this premise, although you can't use any of the named characters.

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EtherRealty

Posted by EtherRealty 1 year ago Report

Nice! And I'll keep that in mind if I get enough disposable income for commission. o3o

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hyhyd

Posted by hyhyd 1 year ago Report

what's shoot the shit mean?

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immortalsane

Posted by immortalsane 1 year ago Report

Shoot the shit is a colloquialism for talk casually

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hyhyd

Posted by hyhyd 1 year ago Report

Fair enough

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hyhyd

Posted by hyhyd 1 year ago Report

Cool, a story that gave me a hard-on, one of the best orgasms I've had in a while... and an existential crisis. Normally I'd be nonchalant to cooking vore but the way this is written out... I really felt like I was experiencing everything from Chris's perspective. I'm definitely curious to see where you take this but at the same time I'm gonna be cautious about it. Also Aileen is fucking hilarious.

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immortalsane

Posted by immortalsane 1 year ago Report

LOL, always glad to hear I made someone blow their top. And yeah, if there's not a little bit of existentialism happening, it's not really my work. ^^;

There's definitely more coming, got one story posted, and 2-5 more in the works!

And Aileen is a gem, she's so fun to write.

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hyhyd

Posted by hyhyd 1 year ago Report

Say, do you think you'd ever draw or commission someone to draw references of these characters?

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immortalsane

Posted by immortalsane 1 year ago Report

You'd have to ask Clancy, the characters belong to him.

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clancy688

Posted by clancy688 1 year ago Report

I don't wanna spend money on getting my chars illustrated, so probably not happening, sorry to say. ^^

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hyhyd

Posted by hyhyd 1 year ago Report

that's super fair. Thankfully, us vore enjoyers have strong imaginations

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