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A short story about a boy who's parents are out, and the babysitter forgets to make dinner. One hungry misunderstanding later, and she makes a more filling meal than she's ever made before...
For those who know the artist Rokka on here, a little while back I got stuck on an image series they did of a boy secretly eating one of his mom's friends. Lo and behold, a little story was born. I don't usually do underage pred stuff, and I know it was banned on the site for a bit, but I'm pretty sure(?) the ban's gone and the story came out pretty well so it had to be shared.
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Posted by LunerDerpy 2 weeks ago Report
Very nice work I hope you do more stories with Thomas in particular
Posted by PaperWriter 2 weeks ago Report
Thanks! We'll see about a sequel... I don't usually do much underage stuff, or much reuse of characters cause my memory's junk and I tend to forget the personality I had in my head when I wrote them. That said, he's a popular character (seeing as this is my most popular story so far) and pretty simple to write, plus looking back I feel like mentioning some poor guy with three daughters he never expected to handle alone could definitely set up a sequel...
Posted by shlurpay64 2 weeks ago Report
I really love how you play up how tantalizingly pudgy Aunt Becky is, especially her belly and ass and I'm glad she does get a bit of sexual stimulation before digesting like a good babysitter.
I would have loved a little more on Becky's trip to the toilet but even mentioning it at the end was appreciated, a plump woman surely leads to quiet the plump dump~
Posted by PaperWriter 2 weeks ago Report
The idea of a prey squishing and squeezing down a pred's throat is always fun, I feel like a pred's throat would get sore eating thin boney people... and I like to not make the prey suffer too much in digestion. I mean, they're all my characters I made, so they should all enjoy themselves a little bit. Who knows what she was doing while waiting for the acids to rise ;)
As to the disposal... not sure why I didn't write it. It's been a while. Maybe cause I try to steer clear of sexual stuff with kids, and for some reason that felt similar? More likely I think I just liked leaving the ambiguous little toilet rating joke there for people to imagine the possibilities.
Posted by shlurpay64 2 weeks ago Report
I think fat women are really underrated as prey for reasons that are so numerous it's hard for me to consciously state them all. I find their plush potbellies, thick round asses, generous breasts, thicc thighs, and chubby faces to be quiet beautiful and seeing someone beautiful gobbled up and turned into shit really appeals to me. Fat chicks also appear gluttonous so I like that Aunt Becky almost got a dose of her own medicine by getting gobbled up and surely she will be the most filling and satisfying of meals! Awww, yeah as much as I'm glad Aunt Becky got digested into a big dump because she's chubby I do feel A LITTLE bad for her so I'm glad she's so easily turned on by grabbing at her fat butt, hopefully she looked on the bright side and gave into her sexual feelings before the sloshy fate that inevitably overtakes a chubby woman in a stomach found her.
Thomas is too young unfortunately for sex (I'm sure he'll be a hit with the ladies when he's older heheh) but in the mean time he's definitely old enough to eat ass and dispose of it. And keep in mind it's not just an adult sized disposal but a rather plush one at that~
Anyway I do really enjoy this story, short enough to be to the point but long enough to hit a lot of buttons, thank you for sharing with us! I'll be sure to read a few more soon.
Posted by PaperWriter 2 weeks ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Meaty prey are fun to write, though they kind of cause a logic conflict in my brain sometimes. In the worlds I tend to write vore, being eaten is kind of a constant threat, so logically people wouldn't let themselves get fat and slow and tasty looking. If the character's an apex predator that doesn't have threats to worry about? Sure. Or, perhaps, a housewife that mostly just hangs out with her friends, doesn't go out much in public, and happened to relax a bit about it and put on a bit of weight? I can make that work pretty easily with my brain. I feel like that's what makes a milf such nice prey, they're just the unavoidable result of having children and getting older, it's not like you can eat them all. Especially since a LOT of people need to have children if you want to have both a standing population and predators.
Personally though, I'm a big fan of a predator putting on some weight as they predate. It makes it feel like the effects of their meals are a little more lasting, acts like a trophy of former meals that they carry everywhere... and can lure other predators to go after that one, whether a lesser pred going for a trophy or a bigger pred keeping down the competition. After all, a bit of careful preparation can turn a meaty pred to nice meaty prey~
Posted by shlurpay64 11 days ago Report
"fat, slow, and tasty" <3
Those are all good points to consider! I feel like milfy pudgy housewives are underrated prey, especially if they are super sweet and "don't deserve it" for any reason other than for being fat.
I like to imagine maybe earlier that day Aunt Becky caught her reflection of her naked body in the mirror after her shower or taking a big dump or whatever and kept checking out her belly/tits/thighs/ass/chubby face/etc. and trying to reason with herself saying "No, I didn't get THAT fat" only for her friend's 10 year old son to teach her the hard way later that day.
I admit I'm a bit of a scatterbrain and only upon rereading the story realized you gave Thomas a tubby belly as well. I do wonder how much of that is from his relationship with "normal food" vs how much is from those girls his age who took that messy humiliating journey through his digestive system and how much pudge will accumulate on his body and where when Aunt Becky flows through his small intestine. Although you're right a well fed predator could turn into a fat delicious treat, hopefully our hero Thomas won't soon find himself on the wrong side of a stomach any time soon.
Posted by unicorn 2 weeks ago Report
I love babysitter scenarios where the sitter ends up being the prey. This was a nice little treat!
Definitely want to see more of Thomas doing what he does best!
Posted by PaperWriter 2 weeks ago Report
Glad to hear you enjoyed it! Babysitters are a very important food group :)
No promises about a sequel, I've got so many projects half-going at a time that I rarely revisit characters unless I was deliberately writing a series. A bit of size difference is fun to write, though, and people do seem to be enjoying this piece a lot... so we'll see!
Posted by Kapitantorrento 2 weeks ago Report
Is it possible to get links to these images mentioned in the description?
Posted by PaperWriter 2 weeks ago Report
Yep! Had to go find the coding in the PM menu, but changed the reference in the description to a link for the first one, they're right there in sequence.
Posted by Kapitantorrento 2 weeks ago Report
Thank you
Posted by Skooldred 2 weeks ago Report
Shota pred...milf prey...babysitter damn this is peak scenario right here. Very nicely as well!
Posted by PaperWriter 2 weeks ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it! You know, I didn't really think about the fact that "shota" is a tag, and it feels a little criminal to not include that given whose work I based it on and the thumbnail I stuck on it.
I don't usually write underage stuff, but babysitters as preds or especially as prey are always great, so if I was gonna dip my toes in there was only really one proper kind of prey to do it with, you know?
Posted by Justsomeone 2 weeks ago Report
This was amazing, I loved it
Posted by PaperWriter 2 weeks ago Report
Thank you!