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A short story about a boy who's parents are out, and the babysitter forgets to make dinner. One hungry misunderstanding later, and she makes a more filling meal than she's ever made before...
For those who know the artist Rokka on here, a little while back I got stuck on an image series they did of a boy secretly eating one of his mom's friends. Lo and behold, a little story was born. I don't usually do underage pred stuff, and I know it was banned on the site for a bit, but I'm pretty sure(?) the ban's gone and the story came out pretty well so it had to be shared.
Thumbnail's openart.ai again.
Weird side note, the site has a shota/milf tag that that I stuck on this piece, but it vanished. Don't know why. I guess that explains why no other pieces had that particular tag though.
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Posted by LunerDerpy 1 year ago Report
Very nice work I hope you do more stories with Thomas in particular
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Thanks! We'll see about a sequel... I don't usually do much underage stuff, or much reuse of characters cause my memory's junk and I tend to forget the personality I had in my head when I wrote them. That said, he's a popular character (seeing as this is my most popular story so far) and pretty simple to write, plus looking back I feel like mentioning some poor guy with three daughters he never expected to handle alone could definitely set up a sequel...
Posted by shlurpay64 1 year ago Report
I really love how you play up how tantalizingly pudgy Aunt Becky is, especially her belly and ass and I'm glad she does get a bit of sexual stimulation before digesting like a good babysitter.
I would have loved a little more on Becky's trip to the toilet but even mentioning it at the end was appreciated, a plump woman surely leads to quiet the plump dump~
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
The idea of a prey squishing and squeezing down a pred's throat is always fun, I feel like a pred's throat would get sore eating thin boney people... and I like to not make the prey suffer too much in digestion. I mean, they're all my characters I made, so they should all enjoy themselves a little bit. Who knows what she was doing while waiting for the acids to rise ;)
As to the disposal... not sure why I didn't write it. It's been a while. Maybe cause I try to steer clear of sexual stuff with kids, and for some reason that felt similar? More likely I think I just liked leaving the ambiguous little toilet rating joke there for people to imagine the possibilities.
Posted by shlurpay64 1 year ago Report
I think fat women are really underrated as prey for reasons that are so numerous it's hard for me to consciously state them all. I find their plush potbellies, thick round asses, generous breasts, thicc thighs, and chubby faces to be quiet beautiful and seeing someone beautiful gobbled up and turned into shit really appeals to me. Fat chicks also appear gluttonous so I like that Aunt Becky almost got a dose of her own medicine by getting gobbled up and surely she will be the most filling and satisfying of meals! Awww, yeah as much as I'm glad Aunt Becky got digested into a big dump because she's chubby I do feel A LITTLE bad for her so I'm glad she's so easily turned on by grabbing at her fat butt, hopefully she looked on the bright side and gave into her sexual feelings before the sloshy fate that inevitably overtakes a chubby woman in a stomach found her.
Thomas is too young unfortunately for sex (I'm sure he'll be a hit with the ladies when he's older heheh) but in the mean time he's definitely old enough to eat ass and dispose of it. And keep in mind it's not just an adult sized disposal but a rather plush one at that~
Anyway I do really enjoy this story, short enough to be to the point but long enough to hit a lot of buttons, thank you for sharing with us! I'll be sure to read a few more soon.
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Meaty prey are fun to write, though they kind of cause a logic conflict in my brain sometimes. In the worlds I tend to write vore, being eaten is kind of a constant threat, so logically people wouldn't let themselves get fat and slow and tasty looking. If the character's an apex predator that doesn't have threats to worry about? Sure. Or, perhaps, a housewife that mostly just hangs out with her friends, doesn't go out much in public, and happened to relax a bit about it and put on a bit of weight? I can make that work pretty easily with my brain. I feel like that's what makes a milf such nice prey, they're just the unavoidable result of having children and getting older, it's not like you can eat them all. Especially since a LOT of people need to have children if you want to have both a standing population and predators.
Personally though, I'm a big fan of a predator putting on some weight as they predate. It makes it feel like the effects of their meals are a little more lasting, acts like a trophy of former meals that they carry everywhere... and can lure other predators to go after that one, whether a lesser pred going for a trophy or a bigger pred keeping down the competition. After all, a bit of careful preparation can turn a meaty pred to nice meaty prey~
Posted by shlurpay64 1 year ago Report
"fat, slow, and tasty" <3
Those are all good points to consider! I feel like milfy pudgy housewives are underrated prey, especially if they are super sweet and "don't deserve it" for any reason other than for being fat.
I like to imagine maybe earlier that day Aunt Becky caught her reflection of her naked body in the mirror after her shower or taking a big dump or whatever and kept checking out her belly/tits/thighs/ass/chubby face/etc. and trying to reason with herself saying "No, I didn't get THAT fat" only for her friend's 10 year old son to teach her the hard way later that day.
I admit I'm a bit of a scatterbrain and only upon rereading the story realized you gave Thomas a tubby belly as well. I do wonder how much of that is from his relationship with "normal food" vs how much is from those girls his age who took that messy humiliating journey through his digestive system and how much pudge will accumulate on his body and where when Aunt Becky flows through his small intestine. Although you're right a well fed predator could turn into a fat delicious treat, hopefully our hero Thomas won't soon find himself on the wrong side of a stomach any time soon.
Posted by unicorn 1 year ago Report
I love babysitter scenarios where the sitter ends up being the prey. This was a nice little treat!
Definitely want to see more of Thomas doing what he does best!
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Glad to hear you enjoyed it! Babysitters are a very important food group :)
No promises about a sequel, I've got so many projects half-going at a time that I rarely revisit characters unless I was deliberately writing a series. A bit of size difference is fun to write, though, and people do seem to be enjoying this piece a lot... so we'll see!
Posted by Kapitantorrento 1 year ago Report
Is it possible to get links to these images mentioned in the description?
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Yep! Had to go find the coding in the PM menu, but changed the reference in the description to a link for the first one, they're right there in sequence.
Posted by Kapitantorrento 1 year ago Report
Thank you
Posted by Skooldred 1 year ago Report
Shota pred...milf prey...babysitter damn this is peak scenario right here. Very nicely as well!
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it! You know, I didn't really think about the fact that "shota" is a tag, and it feels a little criminal to not include that given whose work I based it on and the thumbnail I stuck on it.
I don't usually write underage stuff, but babysitters as preds or especially as prey are always great, so if I was gonna dip my toes in there was only really one proper kind of prey to do it with, you know?
Posted by Justsomeone 1 year ago Report
This was amazing, I loved it
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I find it interesting that this is your most popular story. I have a few guesses, they are just guesses, and I don't know how to prove if they are correct or not. Maybe people like this, because they liked the pictures Rokka posted. Maybe people like shota preds. Maybe people like chubby MILF prey. IDK, but my guess is that people like MILFs.
I guess I will give my random thoughts on the story, because I like to ramble. I know that this was inspired from the pics Rokka posted, but I may deviate from that in my rambling.
I think Thomas is too young. I like it when the characters are old enough to be interested in sexual stuff.
I wonder when Thomas ate his 2nd grade classmate if either of them knew the significance of it, since they were young.
Becky seemed to be bad at babysitting, so I wonder if she was not good at taking care of her own 3 children. That gives me another random thought. Usually a if a parent has to babysit another child, they will do have all the children together. If Becky had, Thomas may have eaten one of her children instead. I assume the story is the way it is simply because Becky and Thomas needed to be alone.
Thomas is old enough to know that someone sleeping can't give a coherent answer, but I assume that his hunger overrode that knowledge, and justified his actions to himself.
Thomas has the potential to be a powerful predator when he gets older, since his mouth stretched far enough to swallow Becky, and he was able to move around with probably around double his weight in his stomach. Thomas hauling himself up the stairs is impressive.
The mention of Thomas eating other girls has me somewhat interested in those scenarios too.
Thomas said that he would have trouble regurgitating someone Becky's size and that gave me a random idea. If the pred can regurgitate their prey just enough to get the prey's hands out of their mouth, then the prey can grab something solid, and hang on while the pred could move away from it. The pred could even try falling to use body weight.
The next morning when Alice comes home she finds Thomas in bed, and his stomach has been doing a good job at digesting Becky. This shows that he is already well on his way to becoming a powerful predator.
I am somewhat interested in more stories of Thomas like prequels where he eats a girl at school, or the park, but I like it when the pred, and prey are old enough for it to be sexual for both of them.
Anyways good job writing, you have skills.
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
I think shota, MILFs, and babysitters are all popular things, so that probably boosted the popularity. (fun fact though, turns out the site has a dedicated "shota/milf" tag that nobody has used before)
Rambling responses to rambling:
- So do I! There's more to write, when the characters are older and less innocent.
- Not that I thought of it at all at the time, but now I like to think of this as the same world as Tina's story. Thomas just awakened very early, probably before they even learned what vore was, and followed his instincts. I like to think he had a nice burp and she passed out well before she melted, or a panicked, digesting child would probably have been a bigger incident.
- Honestly, babysitting a single, well-behaved child sounds like a vacation compared to a three kid house, especially if hers are younger. Could consider it a favor both to and from Becky, giving her a more restful evening like that. Plus, I feel like someone tired from watching three kids all the time might be tired enough to just pass out and forget to cook a meal.
- While Thomas is a good kid, he's not great at controlling his hunger... once he perceived Becky as a potential (and very filling) meal she was basically just food.
- - Back to the setting note. If Tina was a more mental predator, I feel Thomas would be more at the physical end of the range.
- Writing those backstory meals brings us back to the point where he'd be even younger and preds and prey would be even less interesting, I feel.
- Liked the ideas for spitting people out. Gave me a funny mental image of a slightly older Thomas being made to watch a video on how to spit people out if they were unwilling. I imagine as part of detention after something happened to his lunch, and something worse happened to an unfortunate classmate.
- Given how popular the character/story is, I'm definitely tempted to see what I could grow an innocent but voracious boy like Thomas into. Hopefully his house has good plumbing by the time he's in his teens...
Lastly, thanks! For the compliment and the long comments, I mean. Figuring out how to respond to points in people's comments helps me make new ideas, and you give me lots of points to consider!
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I feel like adding more rambles, because I am a nerd.
I think one idea for a young character would be that the guy is going thru puberty at the same time he awakens as a predator, and he gets to explore the exciting new feelings he has about girls. That might be an interesting way for a character to lose their innocence.
Maybe Becky did think that babysitting Thomas would be like vacation, but someone else would have to babysit her children while she did so. Maybe her husband did, while she babysat Thomas. IDK
Having Thomas watch a video in detention on how to regurgitate prey would be an interesting story idea, if you feel like writing it. Maybe Thomas is a star athlete, since he was able to carry Becky up the stairs in his stomach when he was younger. Maybe the school doesn't want to expel a star athlete, and is fine with a few students getting eaten, as long as he doesn't eat too many, or ones with influential families.
You mentioned possibly having more stories with Thomas, and that his house would need good plumbing. In this story, when Thomas lurches awake, he broke down the shape of the woman sitting in his stomach. I could criticize the realism of that digestion, but I appreciate the kinkiness of it. If Becky's bones weren't digested, they might have been visible, but I am assuming that they were. Assuming this is correct, Thomas wouldn't need as good plumbing, as a pred who couldn't digest bones, and wanted to flush them away too.
Another thought about what Thomas will become. If Thomas is not reigned in properly by his parents or other authorities, he could become a predator that has no regard for others and eats whoever he wants, without their consent. If he doesn't go to prison for it, or have other consequences, then an out of control Thomas, might make a great predator to eat unwilling prey.
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
Oh, note for anyone that actually reads comments. The shota/milf tag apparently just falls off when added? No idea where it went. Guess that explains why it's "unused" :/