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Deal of Ouroboros (Fate/Grand Order Up #14) By Vozpazta -- Report

Well, I'd say that went pretty well, all things considered.
Sorry it took a bit longer to get this one done, but it's very long as far as parts go. (Nearly 5.5k words!)

Vote here: https://strawpoll.com/DwyoD0PBxnA

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MoonColva90

Posted by MoonColva90 1 year ago Report

Honestly, unless I'm mistaken, Lev is still nearby, so grabbing it might not be the safest move.

Racnaris57

Posted by Racnaris57 1 year ago Report

Well, hopefully Saber alter gets to come back for Shinjuku.

awdx11551515

Posted by awdx11551515 1 year ago Report

Okay, this time I still added the pred Ritsuka

randomuser13579

Posted by randomuser13579 1 year ago Report

Well at least servant eating servant isn’t annoyingly fatal but hey charisma for the win.

awdx11551515

Posted by awdx11551515 1 year ago Report

I would like to ask if the current plot can be made compatible with the 「other」 option with the highest number of votes if the plot does not conflict.

Vozpazta

Posted by Vozpazta 1 year ago Report

Well sure, but that depends entirely on if the other vote works or not. It's something of a gamble, typically, the more well thought out an other vote is, the better odds it has of actually succeeding.

awdx11551515

Posted by awdx11551515 1 year ago Report

Can you give it a try this time?
Bring the 「other」 option into the winning vote option,
Coincidentally, these are two 「other」 options that are basically the same

Vozpazta

Posted by Vozpazta 1 year ago Report

I don't quite get what you're trying to suggest.

awdx11551515

Posted by awdx11551515 1 year ago Report

What I mean is that the option to "see Medusa digest Saber" does not conflict with the "option" to "persuade Medusa to let you eat her" in the other options
So after "Watching Medusa digest Saber", you can connect to the plot of "Convincing Medusa to let you eat her"

Vozpazta

Posted by Vozpazta 1 year ago Report

Well, that might sometimes be the case, but the vote to eat Medusa here only got 6 votes, and it wouldn't make much sense at all to try to connect those two with that in mind.
They also conflict quite a bit, really, considering the direction the story is about to take.

People have an unlimited number of votes that they can spread out on any option, so if people want to double vote, there's nothing stopping them from doing so. The case here though is that nobody really voted for it.

awdx11551515

Posted by awdx11551515 1 year ago Report

I get it. Thank you