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three prisoners of war are about to find out why you don't cross crown princess Regan Adams-- with a little help from her hungry dragon monstergirl pet Penny.
this is based on a request i got several months ago but was unable to complete in a timely manor
also, yes, if you read my stories often, Penny is based on Quin. i have, like, 12 characters i recycle over and over.
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Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I wonder if Penny would ever turn on Regan. If she did, would the guards like Regan enough to save her, or would they fear the consequences of letting Penny eat Regan.
You did a good job portraying Regan as an asshole. She doesn't care about her maids. Maybe she pays them enough for them to risk it, but they might be forced to work for her.
I would have preferred for the story to be a bit longer and have some details, about what is going on inside Penny's stomach, but I didn't write it, so I shouldn't complain.
Anyways, good job at portraying the characters in such a short story.
Posted by Esprit 1 year ago Report
thanks for the feedback! i suffer from burnout very quickly, so shorter stories are about all i can do
Posted by coolblooded 1 year ago Report
Interesting take on dragoness vore! Wish it was some what longer but beggars cant be choosers. Only advice i would give is add info from inside her stomach. Cant wait for you to release more.