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My friends sister is a snack By theshadowstar58 -- Report

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A wolf boy decides to babysit for his friend. Unfortunately his friends sister is a mouse girl, and well, hunger eventually wins.

Comments and criticism always appreciated.

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Alenalen

Posted by Alenalen 1 year ago Report

Do you think you could make a interactive story like this but longer?

theshadowstar58

Posted by theshadowstar58 1 year ago Report

What do you mean by interactive?

Alenalen

Posted by Alenalen 1 year ago Report

The interactive stories under other, next to roleplay.
Scrolling to the bottom, you can make a interactive story with alternate paths, like
" will you eat this lamia" "yes" "no" "sex slave"
That sorta thing, but with your stories that you make.
Thought it could be fun.

theshadowstar58

Posted by theshadowstar58 1 year ago Report

That's interesting I'd never thought of that or heard of it. It would be interesting to try, I'm still getting the hang of writing stories

Alenalen

Posted by Alenalen 1 year ago Report

I made like 4 before i got good at writing, and because of it I found I'm good at story writing more than short snippets of character then vore or sex writing, for every abandoned interactive is a stepping stone for improvements and self development in porn and vore writing.
And i also found that doing just one full story line at a time is better than making every branching path one after another, so write down your future path ideas at the end of page before saving, like.

You found a thick sleeping bunny girl, she's defenseless and vulnerable.

Eat.
Enslave.
Cock vore.
Breed.

That kinda thing helps me remember what my ideas are and gives you room to explain more in the pre-choices, like.

Eat, her thick, juicy ass is yours.
Enslave, she's yours for the taking, and that thickness calls your name.
Cock vore, your dick hungers for a cute, fat snack to turn into a large load of baby badder.
Breed, bunnies love to breed, she'll be yours forever and love you for it.

This helps me remember the broader details of the choice i wanted to make.

Yumyum18

Posted by Yumyum18 1 year ago Report

So beautiful.

I love wolf preds

Jeff198000

Posted by Jeff198000 1 year ago Report

Chloe sure does find herself getting eaten a lot~

theshadowstar58

Posted by theshadowstar58 1 year ago Report

I should really come up with other names on my stories haha.

Jeff198000

Posted by Jeff198000 1 year ago Report

I like that name. Maybe it reflects what you want yourself.

Jeff198000

Posted by Jeff198000 1 year ago Report

Well if you were my friends sister or anything of the sort, I'd definitely eat you up.