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Tags: Accidental vore Anthro Anthro Pred Big Belly Big Breasts Big Butt Birthday Digestion Drunk pred Drunk prey F/F F/M f/multiple Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Giraffe giraffe pred Male Prey Milf milf pred Mini Giantess Mini Giantess pred Mother Oral Vore POV Prey POV Second Person POV Soft Vore Story written work
Your girlfriend has invited you to come home to visit her mom for her birthday.
Can you ensure that she has a great time to celebrate?
*To not have it be a blob of text, download the story and in Word highlight the whole story, go to Layout -> Spacing -> change Spacing After Number to 6 or 12.*
*This is a pretty long tale (28 pgs and about 13k words) with vore happening pretty late into the story (pg 23) so I hope you can stick around because I'm pretty proud of this one.
This is the fatal version of my previous story (https://aryion.com/g4/view/946245) since people wanted both sides. Just ctrl+f for "bittersweet" to get to where both stories diverge.
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Posted by hungryvulpix 1 year ago Report
this is also solid but I have to admit I really prefer the original version. Which is funny because typically I would much much prefer this ending. Love your mom character and hope we see more of her.
Posted by PinkFox 1 year ago Report
Thanks for chipping in with your thoughts!
To be honest, I prefer the non-fatal version too, probably cause you're still alive to see what else can happen with the girls.
I definitley plan to continue this as a series from the "alive" arc!
Posted by oakheart19 1 year ago Report
I wouldn't mind an alt where the tigress snatches the guy up instead but I like this version too
Posted by PinkFox 1 year ago Report
Thanks for the kind feedback buddy!
There's a whole bunch of different paths the story could have taken.
Believe me, it was a hassle not to write eight different stories like a choose your own adventure book. I'd never get done at that point!
Posted by oakheart19 1 year ago Report
Right right I understand, with so many different possibilities it would be impossible to get any writing done