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All I want for Christmas is.... By Voshine -- Report

WARNING: Graphic digestion, cruel pred and a very brief gore scene

Summary : Tis the season, Surely all of the missing persons were out of town, right?

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! This commission is for a very creative client  VRwrite who is the first of many to use my 5% per tag discount for an OC story ( check the main profile) . I enjoyed writing this story, so much fun!

I hope 2024 is kind to each and every one of you.

Art by : ME ( Used Bing's Dall-e again)

Word count: 9670


Please check this blog post out , I am still on the fence about making a dicord server or not : https://aryion.com/g4/blog.php?id=75771


Commission Sheet: https://aryion.com/g4/view/964876

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Pkmnguy6262

Posted by Pkmnguy6262 1 year ago Report

the micro pred at the end along with the reversal of it definetly sold this one to me~ very nice story and wish thered be more micro pred content~

Voshine

Posted by Voshine 1 year ago Report

Thank you! That was the main idea of the shrunken pred tag as a subversion the common trope

Pkmnguy6262

Posted by Pkmnguy6262 1 year ago Report

yeah, when i started reading it and reached about the halfway point i went like "hm...so where is that shrunken/micro pred stuff now?" and was starting to think it was just mistagged, s ive seen it happen before were people would mistage shrunken prey/pred.

very glad that wasnt the case here tho and it actually did feature it~

Voshine

Posted by Voshine 1 year ago Report

Oh i know this feeling, i despise misleading tags >=)

IddlerItaler

Posted by IddlerItaler 1 year ago Report

A memorable Christmas dinner... THEN spending three days being dinner. The holidays are always a mixed bag.

...Okay. The way you described the final digestion was macabre - impactfully so, it must've been one of the grimmest digestion sequences I've read - but if any prey is to be subjected to that kind of end, it might as well be those two. One can't quite call it justice when Sarah chose to join in on the secret, but hey, it's better than nothing.

Voshine

Posted by Voshine 1 year ago Report

Ayep, a cruel fate for a cruel couple. Karmic retribution at its finest >=)

IddlerItaler

Posted by IddlerItaler 1 year ago Report

All I want for Christmas... Is retribution.