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Tags: Aether (Genshin Impact) animal prey blackmail Burping burping up items chick chicken prey Corruption Cruel Pred cruelty Digestion Digestion Noises F/? F/F f/multiple fandom Fatal fatal digestion feeder Feederism feeding Female Pred Feral feral prey Genshin Impact Lumine manipulation Mass Vore Mona Megistus mother prey observer observers Reluctant Pred Story Unwilling Pred Unwilling Prey Vore story written work
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Finally finished up the second part of the series, this time with Mona being fed a MUCH bigger meal of some chicks and a full chicken afterwards. The poor mage getting manipulated and more desperate for money than ever despite her best efforts~ And it even seems to be working a bit, the two perverted twins' words and payments corrupting her ever so slowly...
Of course, apologies as always for any grammar or misspelling issues, I'm lazy and cringe at my own writing and can't stand to proofread more than once lol
Let me know what you think as always though! Went out of my usual zone and tried out some mass vore vibes this time. Any thoughts or suggestions or comments on where to take it next and what's next on her menu
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Posted by RyuZuu 1 year ago Report
Yeeeeaaaaahhhhhhhh Siiiiiiiiiii!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEEEeEeEEeEeEeEeSSsssssssss!!!!!
Posted by Bredsdick 1 year ago Report
Haha hope you enjoyed and it was worth the wait lol~
Posted by RyuZuu 1 year ago Report
Just...wow, shit. It's over already...jesus christ how fast I read this. Everything felt soooo organic...the narration was amazing, and it lived up to my expectations from the previous chapter of wanting more hot scenes that good read, one of my favorites.
Posted by Bredsdick 1 year ago Report
Thank you so much! Hopefully I'll come up with another chapter someday soon
Posted by Manubestofplus 1 year ago Report
Damn :D. That moment when Aether was pushing the chicken in Mona's throat, and then got his hand swallowed along, awesome! I'm not sure I'd have fared much better than Aether ~. I like how tactile Lumine gets with Mona, and perverted and manipulative all along. The twins have a great dynamic, and it's fun and hot to see them getting flustered by Mona's greatness :D.
I expected we'd see more development on Mona's side, as last time she seemed to be warming up in her dreams to her own taboo thoughts. But she did gulp down these chicks like a champ, so I couldn't ask more from her :].
Posted by Bredsdick 1 year ago Report
Thank you for reading! I'm sure many would have reacted the same way he did lol~ And yep its slow progress getting her more comfortable with her role as a pred but they're working on corrupting her sweet and innocent mind~
Posted by Tsavo 1 year ago Report
My favorite story now has officially become my favorite series~<3
Posted by Bredsdick 1 year ago Report
Aww thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it but you flatter me far too much lol~
Posted by zimupz 1 year ago Report
nice
Posted by Jadeharleyzz 1 year ago Report
Hopefully part 3 comes soon. I'd love to see what or who else Mona ends up eating ;)
Posted by Jadeharleyzz 1 year ago Report
Hopefully part 3 comes soon. I'd love to see what or who else Mona ends up eating ;)