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Woah? Two stories from me in the same day? That's not supposed to happen.
Anyway, here's a story that I've really wanted to write for a long time. All the 1-A girls seeing Eri for the first time and immediately deciding that she's food. I think I did a pretty good job this time. Enjoy~
And like always, constructive criticism is welcome.
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Posted by ineedhelp66 1 year ago Report
I love me some Mina Ws! Great story!
Posted by Randomusernom 1 year ago Report
She's a hot girl, and her quirk makes her an interesting pred. So it's fun to have her eating people. She was the one you were rooting for to win, I take it?
Posted by ineedhelp66 1 year ago Report
Why, of course. Mina is best girl. Pink haired girls FTW.
Posted by Meruem 1 year ago Report
This story is very good, I would really like to see the girls from 1A eating eri more often, but almost no one writes stories with eri
Posted by Meruem 1 year ago Report
It would be cool to have some stories with a girl from 1A or 1B meeting Eri in the school hallway and deciding to have a snack
maybe something with painful digestion
Posted by Randomusernom 1 year ago Report
I'd be willing to do more Eri vore content at some point. Maybe a sequel with th 1B girls fighting over Eri instead, or an alternate ending of this story?
Posted by Meruem 1 year ago Report
Version 1B would also be cool, but the idea of someone coming across it at UA and having a quick snack was never written.
Posted by Meruem 1 year ago Report
the alternative version would be cool too, maybe with momo? She is the one who would have the best chance of winning
Posted by Randomusernom 1 year ago Report
By "it" do you mean Eri? Like some random background character just coming across Eri in the school walls then immediately gulping her down?
As for the alternative version, I figured the winner would be Ochako, since her and Mina were the last ones alive by the end of it, so it'd be the easiest to write.
Posted by Meruem 1 year ago Report
yes eri, but the idea would be for a 1A or 1B student to eat her, maybe nejire? something without instant digestion
Posted by Randomusernom 1 year ago Report
Midnight seems like a pretty good option for that. I figure her digestion would be very slow and very arousing for the prey.
Posted by Meruem 1 year ago Report
painful digestion would be more fun, but the idea of midnight is cool, or momo since she needs calories for her quirk.
Posted by Odin1366 1 year ago Report
My alternate idea is that eating Mina essentially would kill both of them. Mina gets digested, but her acidic quirk melts whoever eats her.
Posted by 2good2btru 1 year ago Report
I really love how casually fatal this story is. Especially with how effortlessly Mina kills Jiro, just melting her into a puddle of goo.
X3
Posted by SoloRin 1 year ago Report
Honestly, there should be more vore stories with Eri in it, both as prey or pred.
Posted by Perodian 1 year ago Report
I like the concept of people deciding a specific person is prey and there's nothing they can do about it, especially in a casual environment. It's interesting, and I liked seeing it play out here.
Posted by AldaQ 1 year ago Report
It would have been better if Mina hadn't digested Eri instantly.
I think this is the first good story I read in which Eri was prey, I haven't seen any other stories so far with Eri or Melissa.
I would choose mei hatsume, mei would eat eri because it would be faster than going to get something to eat.
Posted by Meruem 1 year ago Report
I like this idea