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Wooo! The first chapter that takes place in V3 is here!
This one's a short chapter since it ends right before Team JNPR's fight starts. But for a good reason, as the next chapter will be very different, one I've been personally waiting to start on since V1. Hope you look forward to it~
With that said, as always, have a good read!
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Posted by Meruem 1 year ago Report
I hope someone from RWBY is digested in the next chapters
Posted by Goldendevil21 1 year ago Report
Thanks so much for the chapter.
Actually really enjoyed the part Ruby was teasing Weiss about eating the competition. Yet Weiss is surprisingly the voice of reason to tell Ruby that they are on camera and would create a scene. Showing Weiss still possess some importance to image.
Though still used her body like a wrecking ball during the tournament. My second favorite part being when Weiss started sweating from all the physical labor she is doing. Hey, fighting is a lot of work.
The teamwork during the fight was also good. Can often feel like the characters are only fighting individual opponents rather than fighting as a team.
Also enjoyed the part Yang grabbed Ruby behind the neck and dragging her away as if she was a bad puppy. One, feels like that perfectly matches Ruby, a bad puppy who eats her friends at every opportunity and stealing people's noodles. Yet also shows some skill from Yang that she grabs Ruby from behind so her sister can't eat her.
And did love the part Cinder ate Ruby and hid her body underneath the stand. Not only does that hide the obvious gluttony but that also feels strangely fitting.
And did like the tease at the end with Taiyang mentioning Ruby's mother. Adds a bit of mystery.
Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report
Glad to see you liked the chapter, even if it was on the short side.
Hehe, that bad puppy comparison fits our depiction of Ruby well.
Posted by Hibben 1 year ago Report
Pyrrha's struggle seems to have gotten even harder if she can't enjoy normal food any longer.
Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report
Oh my goodness, I apologize for mistaking who was commenting.
But yeah, Pyrrha is getting hungry.
Posted by vgove 1 year ago Report
hope ruby will be an apex pred again
Posted by Meruem 7 months ago Report
Update soon?