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On the morning of your last day on a business trip to the Midwest, you are getting ready to check out of your hotel and head to the airport. So far, it's been an uneventful couple of days, and you're mostly just looking forward to finally get home again. The only highlight on this boring trip has been some casual flirts with the attractive lady at the front desk, and you feel a little melancholic that you will never see her again. You don't know that you're about to get to know her a lot closer than you ever would have wished...
This is an erotic story that is aimed at mature adults with macro- and vorarephilia. It contains depictions of physical and psychological violence that some people may find disturbing. Minors and people who feel that such depictions upset them are therefore explicitly asked not to read this story. Furthermore, this story is entirely fictional and all erotically portrayed characters are at least 18 years old.
Tags: Aware, Casual, Cruel, Digestion, Disposal, F/fm, Fatal, Hard Vore, Human, New World Order, Shrinking, Soft Vore, Unaware, Unwilling, Violent
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Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
I liked this one a lot! And it was cool to see the surprise cameo from Hannah, she's my favorite of your characters.
But yeah, while sadistic and playful preds are always fun, it's sometimes nice to get a nice pragmatic and thoughtful pred like Victoria.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Thank you! That means a lot coming from you! Yeah it was fun to sneak Hannah in here again, she's been absent too long. Definitely want to give her some more "screentime" in some of the upcoming stories. Glad you liked Victoria too, tried something different with her personality.
Also need to catch up on your most recent writing! Hopefully will get around to that soon.
Posted by Veriden 1 year ago Report
I was worried that you would never come back!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
I was never gone ;) Just a mixture of being extremely busy IRL and suffering from writer's block.
Posted by TwoNineNineSeven 1 year ago Report
Good story.
I liked the bit about the vortex-affiliated president. Looking forward to reading about her in the future.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Thank you! :) Yeah a couple of future stories will also be looking into the politics of this world a bit more.
Posted by 1007821733 1 year ago Report
I waited for four months for this story!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Well I hope it lives up to your expectations! :)
Posted by Discordance 1 year ago Report
Great job!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Whymanamajeff 1 year ago Report
Your writing somehow improves every single time I read it! The disposal as always is incredibly detailed and realistic with a solid grasp on anatomy which I adoreee. Thanks for this story!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Thank you for your kind words. So happy that you enjoyed the story! :)
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
I liked this one a lot. Good cameo from Hannah and a nice pragmatic setting. The knowing each other and flirtation angle is always fun. I like the voring ‘from below’ idea as well. Just well done and well written.
Apologies for not having got back to you regarding a Vortex story - I’m having a bit of Writers Block myself for the last couple months. I’d like to get around to it and also finish part 2 of my Dolcett story soon, but we’ll see.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah getting vored by someone where there's some prior mutual attraction is always nice, hadn't done that in a while so I thougtht I'd use that again here.
Oh, no worries! I know how it is, just let me know whenever you are in the mood for writing one! :)
Posted by ModelbeiInsta 1 year ago Report
I'm very glad you're back. You'll get better at writing from time to time. A classic Vortex adventure that, as always, leaves you wanting more. I hope we can soon delve deeper into the politics and system of Vortex, which is mentioned again and again as small appetiziers. Especially the social score brings so much more potential for the humiliation of the little ones. I was hoping for a story about Alessia and her friends, they are by far my favorites but this story also really convinced me. Thank you very much and please keep it up.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Thank you! :) I'm a bit cautious about leaning into too much worldbuilding because I don't want to bore my readers, lol. After all people are most likely reading for lots of vore action and not because of the politics of some fictional universe! But I'll be adding some more details here and there in the future too.
Alessia and her friends will be getting plenty more attention in the future, the upcoming stories will be getting back to them too. Felt like going back to the American setting for this one though! :D
Posted by ModelbeiInsta 1 year ago Report
For me, that‘s what Make your Stories so special. This world in which a cruel hand decides between winners and losers. For me, the humiliations that lead to vore are just as much at the core of your stories as the actual vore.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
I'm glad people are liking that aspect of the stories too! It originally was just a setting I came up with to give me lots of freedom to write different vore scenarios, but apparently it developed into something more than I intended, lol. Some logical issues with the world nothwithstanding.
Posted by MariustheMage 1 year ago Report
One of your best yet. Outstanding work, Vortex!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Thank you, my friend! :)
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 1 year ago Report
I love this so much. The question of “What if”s and the irony in unaware vore/digestion/disposal is just magnificent!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
So glad you liked it! :)
Posted by fyva111 1 year ago Report
This is a really nice story, thank you for publishing it. I just recently discovered your vore stories, and I like them a lot. Your stories are rare combination of very good writing - with vivid language, right attention to details and good dialogues, - but also just right focus to vore and digestion. Also, contrast and comparison between life of normal-sized protagonist and what happens with shrinkies, works very well. I saw attempt to use that in other stories, but you mastered it.
I didn't read all of your stories yet (I'm a slow reader), but from what I saw, this story is probably the best yet in description of the shrinkie's fate and digestion. I especially liked references about distribution of nutrients into parts Vic's body (even though it didn't seem realistic - but, after all, arguing about realism of vore is silly).
I did found Victoria's character a bit unrealistic though, at least comparing to your other stories where main characters are really well developed: I find it harder to believe that such a pretty girl struggles with having a partner, and her shyness is a bit inconsistent with the way she was raised with hunting and rustic life. But this is really minor thing and it's still well developed: probably it would take too long to explain all this stuff, and we'd have lost interest then.
I am looking forward to reading your new stories (and meanwhile will read those you already wrote).
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Thank you for your comment!
Posted by stu 1 year ago Report
Loved all the pre-disposal teasing and the surprise cameo of the pred with the hardest working tummy. Hannah is a real foodie for tinies.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
She is indeed! Hannah will be playing a bigger role in an upcoming story again too! :D
Posted by Mubaidada 11 months ago Report
I wonder if there will be a scene in the future where tiny can choose to be eaten by one of the giants, which is very exciting.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 11 months ago Report
It's an idea! :) I might put that into a story if it offers itself.
Posted by yotsuba 5 months ago Report
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Posted by yotsuba 5 months ago Report
the emoji didn’t work
Posted by yotsuba 5 months ago Report
I meant to put a heart emoji
Posted by yotsuba 5 months ago Report
❤️
Posted by yotsuba 5 months ago Report
????
Posted by yotsuba 5 months ago Report
nevermind
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 5 months ago Report
:D
Posted by Mubaidada 4 months ago Report
Looking forward to the update of your next work
Posted by fanatiker 4 months ago Report
Ich warte auch, BESTE Storyline die ich je in diesem Bereich gelesen habe. Und ich hab schon viel gesehen. Danke für diese tolle Arbeit!
Posted by Krauser 3 months ago Report
Any new stories in the works? Everyone loves your content!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 months ago Report
There are new stories in the works, just got into a bit of a quagmire of IRL work overload and writer's block/several projects at once. But I'm not dead and there will be more :D