The Christmas Present
By Simrobert2001 -- Report
A lover in a bad relationship finds a tasty treat underneath her christmas tree. F/F, Heavy scat.
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Posted by MaxTwenty 19 years ago Report
Hmm.. starts out a bit awkwardly, and there were a few spots where the syntax was dodgy or generally broken... BUT this is a heck of a good story. Good concept, good execution, a surprise that actually WAS a surprise, as opposed to the common "Don't go in there, he's got a knife" kind. Very nice.