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Team Galactic is nearing the culmination of their plans to harness the power of the lake trio. Meanwhile, Cynthia happens to be visiting her grandmother, and she finds the perfect excuse to take matters into her own hands, powerful partners in tow...
A very, very long-overdue story that I had originally planned to finish and post around the time of the release of Brilliant Diamond/Shining Pearl (which I found to be fun, but very lazily done and poor remakes) to celebrate! I may not be proud of how many times I delayed myself on completing this solo story, but I'm quite happy with how it turned out in the end. The idea of Cynthia stopping the Galactic commanders herself was something I thought seemed simple, but hadn't seen it done before, so I was quite happy to make that a reality. The thought of Cynthia disposing of some of her meals midair tempted me too, frankly.
I had a bit of help from friends who looked it over and made small recommendations, so they're to thank for me including the Pokémon's own little post-digestion scene. Can't say I'm going to do a whole lot of Pokémon pred in the future, but I thought it made sense for this kind of story, and would be fun to try out. Please let me know what you think, and I hope I was able to make something unique with a common but very gorgeous predator! Happy to get this out before this Tuesday's Pokémon Presents.
(Now I've done three of Pokémon's hottest blondes as preds in separate stories, huh? Guess Lillie, Caitlin, Serena, and Bianca beckon, plus maybe Colress...)
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Posted by CandygirlSerena 1 year ago Report
Lillie and Serena are my favorite Pokegirls
Posted by EmblemMan 1 year ago Report
Good taste! They're both very cute.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 1 year ago Report
Haven't read it yet, but it sounds promising on behalf of you always writing good stories!
Also, hey, you changed your name! x3
I think.. it used to be FireEmblemMan, right?
Posted by EmblemMan 1 year ago Report
Thank you! Hope you enjoy it when you do read it. And that may be some sort of Mandela effect, because I've always been EmblemMan, lol.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 1 year ago Report
Ah, I see! Well, sometimes the memory slips x)
Amazing story, by the way! I like how you handled most of it, and I thought the aerial disposal sequence was quite interesting!
When I walked into the story, I had the expectation that Cynthia would maybe do away with two of them, and then upon encountering the third one, she'd find the protagonist (in my mind, Dawn) having made it to the third one, but it was interesting how this strayed from my expectations!
The Pokemon stuff came as a pleasant surprise as well, and the complete dominance which Cynthia asserted was a treat to see, with the swift disposal (in more ways than one!) of the Galactic leaders.
I can't help but be curious about a couple of things, though! In this setting that you are creating or conveying, vore seems.. uncommon? but also extremely casual. Part of this is due to Cynthia's casualness of it all, yet the rest of them are taken aback, or oblivious to the reality of it all!
There's also how this "universe" strays from what one could expect from the games (with vore added into it), since Cynthia is there, but there's sign of, in this case, Lucas!
Lastly, I just want to express my overall enjoyment of your stuff! I think you write incredible stories, and while there are always things that I'd wish to see more of (we all have our preferences), I think it's a treat to see what you come up with!
As a Pokemon fan, and a long-time consumer of Pokemon content, I also love your Pokemon stories quite a bit! I'd love to see what else you cook up over the next while, both Pokemon and not-pokemon!
Also, my vote goes to Lillie.. Shy, timid predators are a joy, especially if they have to deal with the surprising effect of churning up a person.. like the added weight, or the fumes passing through at a higher frequency than expected!
Maybe it could involve some common shipping between her and Moon, or perhaps it'd be another thing in its entirety!
Regardless, amazing story, and keep it up! :)
Posted by EmblemMan 1 year ago Report
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it!
The aspect of vore being uncommon or unheard of is something I do often to make it a little easier for me to write characters as being less prone to falling under the concept of "damn, guess I got eaten today" and make them more believably angered and/or shocked by being nommed. It's just my personal style for many stories, and for this one, I figured that the commanders wouldn't have any idea that a famous Champion as seemingly upstanding as Cynthia would devour her opponents (and to be fair, in this universe she's done that only sparingly before this eating spree takes place). Why they think that can be up to the reader's interpretation.
I'll certainly keep in mind those ideas for a future Lillie story, and thanks for the feedback!
Posted by Simplespectator 1 year ago Report
Always nice to see your work. (Also sorry I didn’t say anything on your last story). And I would love to see a story about Lillie. I have such a soft spot for her, you don’t even know.
Thank you kindly for sharing yet again. Your too kind to us.
Posted by EmblemMan 1 year ago Report
No problem - no need to feel obligated to comment on any of my stories unless the mood strikes you.
That's two positive comments for Lillie so far, so I'll keep her in mind. And thanks!
Posted by Pkmnguy6262 1 year ago Report
interesting looking story, cynthia certainly always a very lovely predator to see.
as for my personal top favorite pokegirl preds itd have to be iono, lusamine, bea, shauna and probably elesa. tho there are a lot of excellent options to use.
Posted by EmblemMan 1 year ago Report
Agreed! Cynthia is lovely as a pred and in appearance, and I hope you enjoy the story when/if you end up reading.
Those are all good choices - Lusamine and Elesa in particular are very high up for me as well.