I have never loved a revenge story so much . Not only was his revenge completely justified . You made it even more justified by showing how they treated him . Add on the fact that rather than give Cynthia some way to come back and fight back you made her powerless to stop him . He didn’t even buckle either , so many times when a revenge story is written the character buckles and feels guilty , here he his resolve never fades . He may have gone slightly too far for Emily since her actions were accidental , but he’s right the teasing and bullying they did after he came back was intentional. As for Cynthia she got what she deserved . Bradley was just a curious guy and she turned him into a ginger bread cookie over a mistake and then tormented him .
This was perfect
I'm glad you enjoyed it, particularly because your comment was the inspiration for it. I figured I'd explore his trauma and let the guys win one for a change.
Posted by Yumyum18 1 year ago Report
Ooh...revenge IS sweet!
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
I have never loved a revenge story so much . Not only was his revenge completely justified . You made it even more justified by showing how they treated him . Add on the fact that rather than give Cynthia some way to come back and fight back you made her powerless to stop him . He didn’t even buckle either , so many times when a revenge story is written the character buckles and feels guilty , here he his resolve never fades . He may have gone slightly too far for Emily since her actions were accidental , but he’s right the teasing and bullying they did after he came back was intentional. As for Cynthia she got what she deserved . Bradley was just a curious guy and she turned him into a ginger bread cookie over a mistake and then tormented him .
This was perfect
Posted by ClosetMonster 1 year ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it, particularly because your comment was the inspiration for it. I figured I'd explore his trauma and let the guys win one for a change.
Posted by Xenophage17 11 months ago Report
Love some transformation with a boy doing the gulping and disposal.