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Spring Fever By ZeldaNoVorsu -- Report

Happy First Day of Spring! I'm kicking off the first season change of the year with a Mario lady story, and naturally for spring, it stars Princess Daisy! She wants to play tennis with Princess Peach, but Peach is unfortunately ill, so Daisy and Toadette journey to the Luncheon Kingdom to get some stew for their friend, only to encounter a pair of "snacks" along the way...

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derpsquid42

Posted by derpsquid42 1 year ago Report

Daisy and Toadette was quite the unexpected pairing, but that was really good. Poor Peach, though... definitely feel that spring fever. And of course putting some bratty turtles in their place as princess and princess attendant poop.

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ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 1 year ago Report

Certainly not a usual pairing, but I'm glad you liked it. Peach certainly had a nasty case of spring fever, but at least she got a good meal out of it in the end. Thos turtles certainly got what they had coming.

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The K

Posted by The K 1 year ago Report

OMG! Where to start! First off I love the dialogue you had for Daisy! Eating Wendy was amazing as were her amazing cheek bloating burps that made the room smell like a hot reptile tank! I love Daisy's cheek bloating burps so much and she did four of them back to back. I also really loved the three fart rings of green gas she performed. How they get wider the further from her butt they got before disappearing. It gave the perfect visual. Digesting and getting a plumper butt as well as the disposal was awesome! Daisy was in top form! Fantastic story with her and Toadette. Also it was sweet of them to care for a sick Peach.

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ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 1 year ago Report

Ah, I am glad you enjoyed it so much! I tried my best with the dialogue to make her peppy and fun without making her seem obnoxious or mean. I certainly was hoping you'd enjoy all of Daisy's cheek-bloating burps, and it would appear I did not disappoint. The fart rings were fun too, so I'm glad you enjoyed them as well. It seems the digestion, bum plumping, and disposal all landed as well to round out this story. I did want to show her friendship with Peach as well, so I thought what better way than to have her take care of the other princess who was under the weather.

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WatermelonArtist

Posted by WatermelonArtist 1 year ago Report

SHE SAID "HI, I'M DAISY!" SHE SAID THE THING LETS GOOOOOO

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