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Roger builds a bathroom for Ester.

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hawkeye7513

Posted by hawkeye7513 1 year ago Report

God bless Stockholm Syndrome!

Morphy

Posted by Morphy 1 year ago Report

If she wasn't killed and remade by that machine I'd say yeah, but she was and with it's implications forced upon her and him...
It reminds me of at least one Isekai anime (How Not To Summon A Demon Lord) where the MC ends up with an enslaved harem (well, two anyway) because their own summoning and binding spell rebounded on them. Mr.Dungeon had no say in her "enslavement" to him. Saved her from oblivion actually-- tho she only has his word on that.
Not saying it's acceptable to enslave people willy-nilly but there's extenuating circumstances.

Morphy

Posted by Morphy 1 year ago Report

Just has a thought about the failed shower. Why not go for a simpler design? A shower is really just a fancy waterfall so why not start with that and work his way up the technology-progression tree?
And to be honest, a heated, controllable waterfall sounds freakin' awesome.

An idle thought; any clothing he makes for her are effectively part of him. Does that mean he's always stroking (loose bits) and squeezing (tight bits) her now? He should be careful not to get too hedonistic and turn into a Perverted Sex Dungeon. (This is not a bad thing but it would get repetitive for the viewers eventually)

Gimlet

Posted by Gimlet 1 year ago Report

Clothing that's 'him' is actually mentioned in later chapters and he can't actually feel... quite, parts of his dungeon. Or at least it doesn't feel the same. But yeah, as she's wearing 'him' he always knows where she is in a much more visceral way. Plus he is always getting better at this as time goes on.

As to the shower? Honestly after the bath he could probably build a shower with the experience. He's learning fairly quickly on the mechanics of how this all works, but he tends to get a bit focused and after this he builds a load more baths... might be also biased after this experience making him think more on bath time in general! :)

Morphy

Posted by Morphy 1 year ago Report

I'm wondering, with all these ideas of things that aren't meant to outright kill or maim, some rando adventurer will have their mind blown... multiple hot springs/baths/showers, possibly a working tavern (a cold drink after the onsen is highly reccommended for maximum refreshment), a room to rest/recharge in, maybe more.

Would have to barter since money isn't worth much to a dungeon. The currency being mana and whatever the bartered item is, the amount of mana it's worth when dropped into the sink.

(Unless gold pieces are worth a lot of mana?)

Gimlet

Posted by Gimlet 1 year ago Report

Or they can trade for money, then buy things he's interested in. He has monsters that can go out of him after all, and Ester.

As to him building his dungeon up into a non-dungeon, definitely. As you say he's already heading in that direction, and I have parts written that are showing a fair bit of that, and it's only going to get more so. He doesn't want to BE a dungeon after all.

And no, gold isn't worth mana directly, but it's probably a very useful material for him. If he gets enough to test with.