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A tale about a very unique warhorse, and her ravenous adventure.
This story will soon have its own illustration, which I created together with Cravenexx https://www.furaffinity.net/user/cravenexx
And ms850 helped me with the editing of this piece, and I hope he will continue to help me in the future, as his command of English is much better than mine, hehe. He also writes stories, and they are really great, so I recommend you visit his profile and check them out. ^^
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Posted by Jedzoku 11 months ago Report
I didn't notice it at first but on my third time reading I noticed that you refer to Sorun as a male when the second man starts resisting. "his prey" rather than her prey.
Posted by DragonCZ 11 months ago Report
Ah, missed it. English is not my first language, and I rely a lot on the translator DeepL, which is great but not perfect. This mistake must have been made during the translation, and both I and my friend who did the proofreading must have missed it.