Oooh, very nice! I like the layout here. The placement of the snake's various head angles is a bit wonky, the way it goes from facing left to right to left again, with both left heads right on top of each other so my eyes sort of followed them down that way at first. But I love the way the snake's body takes up the focus of the page and becomes the separator for the panels. Definitely not something vore comics do often, mine included- I should take a page from you and experiment with this kinda thing as well!
Posted by Omny87 1 year ago Report
Oooh, very nice! I like the layout here. The placement of the snake's various head angles is a bit wonky, the way it goes from facing left to right to left again, with both left heads right on top of each other so my eyes sort of followed them down that way at first. But I love the way the snake's body takes up the focus of the page and becomes the separator for the panels. Definitely not something vore comics do often, mine included- I should take a page from you and experiment with this kinda thing as well!