Hey all, thanks for the new watchers and readers!
Generalized writer fuzz below:
I'm starting to feel some writerly insecurities with Modern Romance. The storyline I'm following is veering into science fiction, but I'm afraid I'm not following the actual relationship arc between these two characters, and I'm not even sure if I'm doing a good job with it.
The initial idea was to put Jack into a relationship where he's just being used and feeling frustrated all the time, but at the same time powerless to stop it. The tigress isn't really treating him as a boyfriend as much as just a piece of meat.
In the last few stories that's changed a bit, and she's starting to give Jack a bit more, and in the coming stories she'll basically just be a...
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