Fischie - 5 years ago

Nicely detailed snek noms^^

Hariken - 5 years ago

poor boy, he needs more treats!

ChaoskampfNunc - 5 years ago

I think someone needs belly rubs :3

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

Any reason why the stomach acid was glowing?

RiceBelch - 5 years ago

Thanks for reading!
I don't know about a follow up, however, but who knows when will that happen. :)

Mechdragon1k - 5 years ago

From wiki showing how cool and vorey they are.

Komodo dragons eat by tearing large chunks of flesh and swallowing them whole while holding the carcass down with their forelegs. For smaller prey up to the size of a goat, their loosely articulated jaws, flexible skulls, and expandable stomachs allow them to swallow prey whole. The undigested vegetable contents of a prey animal's stomach and intestines are typically avoided.[37] Copious amounts of red saliva the Komodo dragons produce help to lubricate the food, but swallowing is still a long process (15–20 minutes to swallow a goat). A Komodo dragon may attempt to speed up the process by ramming the carcass against a tree to force it down its throat, sometimes ramming so forcefully, the tree is knocked down.[37] A small tube under the tongue that connects to the lungs allows it to breathe while swallowing.[28] After eating up to 80% of its body weight in one meal,[8] it drags itself to a sunny location to speed digestion, as the food could rot and poison the dragon if left undigested for too long. Because of their slow metabolism, large dragons can survive on as few as 12 meals a year.[28] After digestion, the Komodo dragon regurgitates a mass of horns, hair, and teeth known as the gastric pellet, which is covered in malodorous mucus. After regurgitating the gastric pellet, it rubs its face in the dirt or on bushes to get rid of the mucus, suggesting it does not relish the scent of its own excretions.[28]


Komodo excrement has a dark portion, which is stool, and a whitish portion which is urate, the nitrogenous end-product of their digestion process.
The largest animals eat first, while the smaller ones follow a hierarchy. The largest male asserts his dominance and the smaller males show their submission by use of body language and rumbling hisses. Dragons of equal size may resort to "wrestling". Losers usually retreat, though they have been known to be killed and eaten by victors.[41][42] The Komodo dragon's diet is wide-ranging, and includes invertebrates, other reptiles (including smaller Komodo dragons), birds, bird eggs, small mammals, monkeys, wild boar, goats, deer, horses, and water buffalo.[43] Young Komodos will eat insects, eggs, geckos, and small mammals, while adults prefer to hunt large mammals.[6] Occasionally, they attack and bite humans. Sometimes they consume human corpses, digging up bodies from shallow graves.[32] This habit of raiding graves caused the villagers of Komodo to move their graves from sandy to clay ground and pile rocks on top of them to deter the lizards.[37] The Komodo dragon may have evolved to feed on the extinct dwarf elephant Stegodon that once lived on Flores, according to evolutionary biologist Jared Diamond.[44]

The Komodo dragon drinks by sucking water into its mouth via buccal pumping (a process also used for respiration), lifting its head, and letting the water run down its throat.[38]

Saliva
Although previous studies proposed that Komodo dragon saliva contains a variety of highly septic bacteria that would help to bring down prey,[41][45] research in 2013 suggested that the bacteria in the mouths of Komodo dragons are ordinary and similar to those found in other carnivores. They actually have surprisingly good mouth hygiene. As Bryan Fry put it: "After they are done feeding, they will spend 10 to 15 minutes lip-licking and rubbing their head in the leaves to clean their mouth ... Unlike people have been led to believe, they do not have chunks of rotting flesh from their meals on their teeth, cultivating bacteria." Nor do Komodo dragons wait for prey to die and track it at a distance, as vipers do; observations of them hunting deer, boar and in some cases buffalo reveal that they kill prey in less than half an hour, using their dentition to cause shock and trauma.[39]

Mechdragon1k - 5 years ago

Great fic, I would love to a follow up that covered in details either digestion or escape.

RiceBelch - 5 years ago

I only based it off some research; since this is a vore story it's going to not be entirely realistic. This is entirely new to me writing about this particular species so i'm still trying to improve. Thanks for reading (and for the info)!

RiceBelch - 6 years ago

Thanks for reading!
this story was originally in 3rd person so that's why there's an error; I'll change that right away.

catontoast - 6 years ago

This is pretty good! Has a sort of Secret of Nimh feel to it. I like the snake's interaction with Nutmeg, and Nutmeg's realization that the snake needs to eat her to survive.

Just a little nitpick though, you seemed to change between 1st and 3rd person, like in this line: "I could hardly see through the shadows of the trees . I thought he was just another mammal, a local prey animal -- not a bloodthirsty creature! She only heard about snakes in fables and stories, ones that every mouse should be afraid of."

It went from 'I' to 'she', and I'm not sure if that was intentional? Other than that, great job! I love to see M/F content on the portal.

RiceBelch - 6 years ago

Thanks for reading! It was a struggle to convey Nutmeg (and being satisfied with this ending).

ChaoskampfNunc - 6 years ago

I do so love when cute little mice are shown their proper place as nothing more than food