g4 :: Her Deadly Desire by iliketoread

Your stories are so perfect!! Loved it, keep up the great work!!!

Thanks! Appreciate you taking the time to comment. Looking forward to the new cruel story you've mentioned in your blog!

Posted by EmpressKora 1 year ago Report

It’s incredibly flattering knowing you like my work! It’ll take a bit because I set myself up quite hard with all the ideas, thank you!

Posted by Altimos 1 year ago Report

Oh, an interesting read... definitely looking forward to seeing what comes and if they're able to rescue Olivia.

I did see talk about being turned into shit throughout this story, is that implied that there will be disposal later?

Also, at the end of the story...
“We’re going to end up in the stomach of that freak and it’s all my fault…” Olivia mumbled, “It’s all my… fault…” before returning to sobbing to herself.

It says Olivia, who is supposed to be in Hazel's stomach...

Again, good read! I'm looking forward to seeing what comes. I really do hope they can save Olivia, wrong place wrong time, indeed. But who are we kidding, we're not here to see shrunken people survive XD
Well... other than the non-fatal lovers X3

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

I can't believe I accidentally swapped names at the end of the story. Thanks a bunch for pointing it out, it definitely was not what I meant to have written lol. Its fixed now :-)

But yes, following the pattern of my stories, I don't think its looking too good for the two Minis... Who knows, maybe one day I'll pull a fast one on readers and make a Mini come out victorious...

There will be disposal in the next part. I didn't find it particularly fitting in this story's narrative so I had to move it to later.

Thanks for the comment and reading!

Posted by AnAccount 1 year ago Report

The amount of narrative and drama is great! I definitely wouldn't say it's lacking, it's perfect

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Noted, thanks! I've been a bit conflicted with how much I've been focusing on 'story elements' versus just getting to the vore, so thank you for the feedback!

Posted by AnAccount 1 year ago Report

The build up adds so much. Hazels same reason for escalating is why I want to read your stories. The characters are more developed and it makes the moments that matter more satisfying

Posted by xvx17 1 year ago Report

Another wonderful job. I'm glad to see another story from Ashley's universe (my favorite character for many reasons)

Just the way he describes the settings, the costumes, and the personality of each girl makes the story feel alive. It's almost like I can see everything (like it's a movie)

Also, I was surprised (and at the same time very happy) to see the disposal dialogue from the minis and Hazel. Since I assumed you wouldn't write that kind of content. But then I thought that the reason for not mentioning it in Ashley's story was because you considered it unnecessary and in that case I support the decision not to include it.

As always, I try not to go into too much detail in the comments. Because if I had to mention everything I like about the story it would be too long.

I look forward to the continuation of the story

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Yeah I'm typically indifferent on disposal scenes themselves so I include them only when I feel like they fit into whats going on. Although disposal dialogue or any teasing degrading the tiny, I love.

Glad you enjoyed the story, cheers!

Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report

Good stuff! Exactly the kind of scenario I like, I can't wait for the next part!

I think this might be your best story in terms of intrigue, it actually kept me guessing about who was going to end up eating who with the characters shuffling about the party in a frantic but organic way.

Even the feral stuff, which I'm not into, was woven into the story in an effective and believable way to amplify the macro/micro vore.

Again, well done.

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Thanks!

I feel like a lot of the recent work I've done was definitely not your preference, so I'm glad you got to enjoy this one! Your stories are always so good so I gotta find ways to return the favour.
Funny enough I never planned to have feral prey stuff in this story, it just sorta happened, and like you explained, it kinda fits. I actually wrote so much fish stuff I had to cut a bunch lol. Guess I'm too obsessed with girls swallowing anything living that can fit into their mouth...

Anyway, thanks for reading and the kind comment!

Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report

It's okay, as far as this fetish is concerned I have very narrow preferences, so it's something I'm used to.

Oh, and hopefully in the next part Hazel washes Sophia off or something before someone accidentally puts a piss-flavored mini in their mouth... :P

Posted by blab123 1 year ago Report

Another great entry in the Miniverse! I really like the narrative and drama you are building with these characters, so I wouldn't worry about focusing on it too much; it really enhances the story and creates really good tension for the actual vore to capitalize on. Speaking of drama, that poor Ashley, still struggling to cope with what Ethan put her through. If only he chose Hazel instead... they both would have gotten exactly what they wanted, assuming Hazel wouldn't be put off by a willing mini given that she seems to enjoy the idea of tormenting her prey.

I really like how you've characterized the other girls, and can't wait to see more of Erika and Cara in their respective stories in this series. I also found Ana to be quite interesting despite her very brief involvement in the story; didn't expect to see someone nonchalantly bring up the idea of swallowing a tiny that wasn't one of the core four, regardless if she was doing it intentionally to mess with Sophia or not.

As for the vore itself, Hazel holding poor Olivia by the leg as she partially swallows her was awesome, probably one of my favorite moments from any of your pieces of writing. Couldn't help but feel bad for her when Hazel decided to swallow her for real; poor girl really was just in the wrong place at the wrong time, and was forced through the most degrading and tormenting thing possible as a result without anything she could do about it. While I have a feeling Olivia's fate is sealed at this point, I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store for her, Maya, and especially Sophia.

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Yeah it would be rather interesting to see what sort of story it would have been if Ethan wanted Hazel to eat him rather than Ashley. I assume Hazel would eventually go through with it, but just as you said, I wonder if she would enjoy it as much with such a willing prey.

Funny enough, the person who edited this story also had Ana pique their interest. I just sorta had her there for some tease-y dialogue and as a possible returning character somewhere down the line. I admit she does have that mocking yet uncaring attitude that can be pretty hot lol.

Glad you enjoyed the swallowing part. I've been really struggling every time I get to the swallowing parts in my stories. Mainly because I always have a nagging feeling inside of me that keeps telling me that I need to make the swallowing unique and not like something I've written before. It feels like I've written all there is to write with swallowing scenes but I know that's not true.

Thanks for the comment!

Posted by QAQAQ 1 year ago Report

Love this series so far, I like the small mention of Ashley and Ethan there, I’m sad about how their story ended, wish there was a different ending where she let him out despite all the difficulties and they grew closer or even become kink partners in a way XD? Would you ever consider taking commission for alternative endings?

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Thanks, happy to hear that you're enjoying the series. I suppose they would grow closer if Ethan did survive but I'm not sure how good of a relationship that would be or how long it would last. Whos knows though.

At this time, I would probably not accept any commissions, sorry. I'd rather not owe anybody for anything I write so that I can only disappoint myself, LOL. But I'll think about your idea, I've been considering writing a collection of alternative endings that were suggested by readers.

Thanks again!

Posted by QAQAQ 1 year ago Report

Omg that actually sounds awesome, and your idea actually sounds way better where Ethan survived instead of being let out loool. Will keep an eye out for the updates for both the main series and that possible alt ending

Posted by Tummylock 1 year ago Report

Your writing are absolutely fantastic. The dialogue, the teasing, all including the vore scenes, it's truly one of the best vore things I've ever had. And yes, I think that maybe, future stories would be more vore focused. But even focusing on narrative it's still gorgeous!

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

I appreciate the kind praise! Thanks also for the feedback, I'll take it into consideration. Hope you enjoy future stories. Cheers!

Posted by DocClamor 11 months ago Report

Never cease to impress me with each story you pump out. The level of detail you put into each piece really fleshes out a vivid picture and gives a fully immersive experience. I admire your work, keep it up.

Posted by iliketoread 11 months ago Report

Thanks Doc! Flattering to hear that you think my work is worth admiring, means a lot. And glad to know that the time I spend pulling my hair out over details is worth it! You seem to be planning to post your own stories to Aryion it seems? I'll be eagerly waiting to read what you write, if that's the case! Cheers!

Posted by DocClamor 11 months ago Report

Yessir, trying to at least. Not sure how long it'll take to get the permissions necessary to do so, but I appreciate the sentiment good sir. :D

Posted by Razorwind1 11 months ago Report

The King is back lol! Another great story with great build up too. Cant wait to see where its gonna go in the next part. I was curious but are you going to continue with Vore University? I really hope you do because Im invested in that story and I know others are too, Emma is a beast when it comes to her food! Plus I wanna see where Jack's mind is after her most recent "dinner".

Posted by iliketoread 11 months ago Report

Thanks for the generous words! Makes all the writing worth it lol. Next on my agenda is either Vore University 5 or an interactive story I've been working on. Not sure what I should commit most my time to next, I really want to work on both. I think my ideas for both VU5 and the interactive are pretty sweet so its an internal battle lol.

Posted by AlbertKwon9182 10 months ago Report

I love how at the house party, Hazel is asking for life (and mainly giantess vore) advice from Ashley, and Ashley thinks she is giving her advice to Hazel, but actually, they are talking about two completely different things involving digestion of tiny prey lol. Really like the irony in it. Fantastic work!

Posted by iliketoread 10 months ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad that little ironic piece got noticed, felt it was a fun little point to the story. Cheers!

Posted by Zabas392 4 months ago Report

Any word on a sequel?

Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report

Unfortunately nothing that I can say will be soon. I've been distracted by other stories/ideas. I do really want to continue this series but I am rather slow at writing these days and get pretty busy with other stuff.

It's nice to see that there are people interested in its continuation, gives me some motivation to get pen to paper.

Cheers!

Posted by FrogsToads 2 months ago Report

I will pay you to make a part 2 pleaseeeee make a part 2

Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report

I promise to try get to it when I have the chance! I'm sure we'll see it sometime soon, so stay posted.