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I know, I didn't think I was going to upload a story either.
(All Characters are 18+ in this story)
Ethan is obsessed with Ashley and fantasizes about getting eaten by her. Ashley, a bit of an edgy brat, does not take kindly to the idea. Will Ethan fulfil his dream or will Ashley crush it in it's tracks?
This story takes place in the Miniverse, which is a series I've planned out that follows four girls. Currently there are four stories projected, ending with The Incident. If you love vore, you're gonna love the finale. I'm attempting to make this series more 'believable' than the stories I've written in the past. Additionally, I'm trying to challenge myself to make a story with not-so-common pred types. If you think I've done a good job or have criticisms, please let me know! I really hope people enjoy it, a part of me feels guilty taking such a long break from writing.
This story is 17,000 words. I was aiming for less but the story demanded more, I am simply the hand that holds the pen. Please enjoy and if you have any comments, let me know!
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Posted by Avenger233 1 year ago Report
！！Yeeeeeeeeep!.Today is the best day of this year. I haven't seen yet.But I bet that it will definitely be a masterpiece.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Hope you enjoy it!
Posted by CastleCrashing 1 year ago Report
Well, Ethan certainly got what was coming to him.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Ethan, Ethan. What a prick.
Posted by TheRumblinger 1 year ago Report
I remember reading one of your stories a long time ago, thanks to you I gained the motivation to try writing something myself! It's good to see you back! ^^
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Always awesome to hear about other writers getting motivation from the stuff I write. Your stories are great, I still have to get to your newest one!
Posted by TheRumblinger 1 year ago Report
Thank you very much!! I feel honored to know that you liked my stories ^^
Posted by Animo24 1 year ago Report
Awesome a new story :) can't wait to read it when I am free
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Hope it ends up being a fun read :) Thanks!
Posted by Animo24 1 year ago Report
It was I really love your storys
Posted by johnnyboy246 1 year ago Report
hold shit, this was really good. i wansn't expecting for here to be acctually caring and i was totally caught off guard by the mental health stuff that both ash and ethan were going through.
amazing read. even gave me the motivation to start writing somthing again
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Yeah, I didn't really want to go too much into the emotional weeds but the story needed some of it to work. I'll be looking forward to the new stories you write. :) Thanks for the exceedingly kind comment!
Posted by Joe3e 1 year ago Report
Everything Il could’ve ever hoped for and more. I love the unwilling pred/hesitant pred, it just does something for me. But even apart from that role, I loved Ashley’s character. Can’t wait for what you have planned next!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
I'm currently quite obsessed with trying to do pred/prey relationships that are not as common on this website, really hoping I did the unwilling pred justice lol. Ashley is an enjoyable character to write, if I can get myself to finish this series, you'll be seeing a lot more of her! Thanks!
Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report
I wasn't exppecting a new chapter either, but I welcome it.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
I hope more unexpected chapters are on the horizon...
Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report
So do I :D
Posted by VoreFiend2099 1 year ago Report
Glad to see you return. Definitely one of the best writers on this website.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thank you for the incredible compliment... But there are too many amazing writers on this website that deserve more recognition. And don't get me started on the ones that once wrote stories but have disappeared in recent times.
Posted by Tummylock 1 year ago Report
It's unbelievable to see you coming back to upload, it's like a dream coming true. I love how realistic are the characters, Ethan is such a terrible person, he don't deserve a kind person like Ashley. Can't wait to see more, you are one of the best writers here
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
I'm honestly surprised I've finished a story myself. I've got way too many unfinished ones... Ethan should have spent less time fantasizing and more time trying to better himself, *sigh. I'm grateful that you consider me one of the best, I'm just out here obsessed with telling deranged stories.
Posted by Logannubby 1 year ago Report
Once again blessed by the god of writing
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Anything for you Logannubby
Posted by WestofJames 1 year ago Report
Awesome work again! It was a great story and a fun read. Hope to read more soon!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thanks! I hope to write some more soon!
Posted by GacoMichael 1 year ago Report
The wait was really worth it. It's a pleasure to have you back.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Feels good to be writing actively again!
Posted by blab123 1 year ago Report
I'll be honest, I wasn't expecting to see another story from you, so this was more than a pleasant surprise! Can't wait to give it a read when I get enough spare time, and I also can't wait to see what else you have in store!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Hope you like it!
Posted by blab123 1 year ago Report
Have to say this is one of the most unique stories I’ve read, certainly one of my favorites. Ethan and Ashley’s interactions, particularly once they actually open up to each other, as well as how Ashley comes to terms with what happened at the end of the story, definitely make it feel more grounded and realistic. Can also say that Ethan’s epiphany he has way too late is oddly relatable, so that helps the characters feel even more real.
If I were to give any constructive criticism, it would be to tone down the 4th-wall breaks a bit; while they can be a little funny and definitely give more insight into what some characters are thinking, the former can be a bit distracting from the rest of the story and interrupts the flow a bit.
Overall a great story with well written characters and interactions, and I look forward to the next installments in this series!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
I can understand and agree with the 4th-wall breaks being distracting. I normally would never add such parts to a story but this story was originally one big joke and so it had A LOT of them. After coming to my senses I heavily trimmed them down but clearly left some...
Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback!
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
Great story ILTR. Always good to see a new story by you pop up as you’re very inventive and there’s sure to be good dialogue.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
Posted by beadaxe 1 year ago Report
Glad to see you back. I love your stories
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Glad to be back! Cheers!
Posted by xvx17 1 year ago Report
What a masterpiece, my heart trembled when reading this. It's been a long time since a story has been able to make me feel this way. A mix of comedy, melancholy, nostalgia, emotion, intrigue and genuine sadness. Curiously, they are emotions that relate too well. It was just perfect from start to finish, I have no words! I write this while shedding some tears, somehow I can see my life ironically reflected in many things in this story.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thanks! You got me blushing... ...Hope you enjoy my future stories half as much!
Posted by HentaiMaster90000 1 year ago Report
Poor Ash... I hate what Ethan did to her and how much I relate to him lol.
Amazing story
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Can't blame him for wanting to get swallowed by a babe like her...
Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for the kind comment!