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Tags: Absorption ambushed prey Anal Vore angry pred arezu Arven Asphyxiation Butt Casual Observer Casual pred Casual vore choking Cruel Pred deception dehumanization Dehumanizing Prey Digestion Disposal emma (pokemon) F/F F/fm F/M failed escape attempt Fatal Female Pred Female Prey femdom florian Foot Gentle Pred Graphic digestion Inanimate prey Inanimate transformation Insertion Irida Juliana lying observer Macro/Micro Male Prey mature female mature pred mature woman Melony melony (pokémon) Milf milf pred mind break misunderstanding Multiple Preds Multiple Preys mummification Nemona Odor Older Pred Oral Vore Painful Digestion Painless Digestion perrin Pokemon Pokemon Legends: Arceus Pokemon Scarlet and Violet pokemon sword and shield Post Vore Scat Post-Vore Pre-Vore punching Reformation rescue attempt revenge Ryme ryona sabi sadistic pred sadistic predator Same Size Scat sentient ass sentient butt sentient fat sentient pudge shoe entrapment sleepy prey Soft Vore Soul transfer Sweat taunting taunting pred teasing Teasing Pred threat of digestion threat of vore threatening prey toilet disposal tomboy tomboy pred torture trample tricked pred Uncaring Pred Unwilling Prey vengeful pred Willing Pred Willing prey
Summary: Juliana, Perrin, and Irida(?) head to Montenevera to save Florian from his callipygian confinement. Meanwhile, Nemona deals with the remaining shrunken criminals. The 6th Gym Leader makes an appearance.
Disclaimer: Spoilers in comments. Make sure to read the story in full before looking below.
Word Count: 29,234 words (divided into 11 sections)
Author’s Note: Well this chapter was a long time coming. I’ve had this specific plot development in mind since September of last year. This is a big chapter for me. Not just length or the three vore scenes I had to squeeze in before the finale. I’ve been eagerly waiting to start peeling back some layers and potentially adding some more. Did this chapter answer some questions? Raise some questions? Oh! We shouldn’t discount the other big events of this chapter.
Anyway, I hope that you enjoyed this chapter, and that you are left looking forward to the Season 2 Finale, which is scheduled to come out next month.
Please leave any comments you have down below.
Character References:
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2. Copy the link and paste it onto a new tab.
3. Don’t know what to tell you, you have to type in the character’s name and franchise in the search bar and find the image yourself.
Nemona: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Nemona#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Nemona.png
Mr. Jacq: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Jacq#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Jacq.png
Ms. Raifort: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Raifort#/media/File%3ALeague_Club_Room_Large_Sprite_Raifort.png
Juliana: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Juliana_(game)#/media/File%3AScarlet_Female_Trainer.png
Florian: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Florian_(game)
Perrin: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Perrin#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Perrin.png
Irida(?): https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Irida#/media/File%3ALegends_Arceus_Irida.png
Emma: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Emma#/media/File%3AEmma_PG.png
Arven: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Arven#/media/File%3AViolet_Arven.png
Ryme: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Ryme#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Ryme.png
Sabi(?): https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Sabi#/media/File%3ALegends_Arceus_Sabi.png
Melony: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Melony#/media/File%3ASword_Shield_Melony.png
Cogita: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Cogita#/media/File%3ALegends_Arceus_Cogita.png
Arezu(?): https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Arezu#/media/File%3ALegends_Arceus_Arezu.png
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Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Not gonna say what’s going to happen (already have it mapped out) in the Season 2 Finale next month, but I’m wondering why you are saying that?
Not a fan of the prey?
A big fan of the pred?
Or did I just really cook with the scenes involving the two in this chapter that it’s really swaying your mind in one direction?
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Also let’s try and substitute the characters names for these two with pred and prey going forward. For people who decide to read the comments first before reading the story (no worries I’m not bothered but I know that it happens)
Posted by SSV 11 months ago Report
first half: Aw ya he’s coming back! Now I don’t need to worry.
Second half: god dammit! Back to worrying!
Man there’s so much in this chapter. Florian and that weird void has was in. Irdia(?] true form. Annnnd now Florian is being beaten to a pulp and Juliana is being carried away in a digestive sac. Seems like Melony going to enjoy turning her into nice fat. God I’m going to be thinking about this for the next month. I’m sure everything will turn out fine (hopefully] but I can’t help to think this’ll ending badly for Juliana. Maybe Miraidon will help somehow. Welp now I need to wait for the next chapter.
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Yea. Those first two lines of your comment pretty much summed up how I thought you would react to the story.
I’m sure that you weren’t alone in thinking that everything would be “okay” once Florian was reformed…only for things to suddenly become a lot worse.
But hey…it is the chapter before the Season 2 Finale chapter. The stakes are going to be high. I will say that both you and I will be looking forward to next month’s chapter release.
Posted by SSV 11 months ago Report
Ohh you clever bastard. You’re playing with our hearts here!
Posted by Dongers 11 months ago Report
Spoiler:
Really hoping Juliana finds some way out. She's my favourite character. Perhaps she runs into Arezu and Florian? Or what would be even cooler would be if Juliana learns that she can reform too. She is Florian's twin after all.
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Thanks for commenting. It’s always fun to hear how people think the next chapter will proceed. I won’t say what is going to happen, but I’m really glad that Juliana is your favorite character.
I’ve always feared that there would be less Juliana fans because the story’s focus has more often been on her twin brother. I try to give Juliana her own storylines of focus to mitigate this, but I just don’t get as much feedback as I like so I don’t know if it’s working or not.
Anyway, I don’t want this reply to end with it sounding like I’m complaining (I’m grateful for the comments that I do get for my stories) but I hope that you’re looking forward to the next chapter.
Posted by Edddd 11 months ago Report
Nice work! the tension is coming to a head nicely and your writing remains unpredictable, I hate when I can consistently anticipate a plot.
Love the slow corruption of Florians character, cant believe hes hard in that situation. perhaps defying death so often has made him numb to danger, that or he really is becoming a masochist who enjoys receiving cruelty from women 0.o
Im also really looking forward to how Jul-... Melony's meal develops (or perhaps departs?)
Kudos all around!
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Great to hear that the climbing action up these Glaseado Mountains has kept you guessing. Hopefully the way to the top of this mountain, and the descending action of this season, will be just as invigorating of an exercise of a hike.
Posted by DudeBoi54 10 months ago Report
If Juliana survives, I hope you’ll make a Bad End where she gets churned up for good!
Posted by Fatedmeal 9 months ago Report
We'll have to see when I get to work on Ch. 20...still have at least one other story to work on before I tackle the next part of this story...but that hypothetical is a very tantalizing Bad End idea.