Posted by GurglingGoodness 11 months ago Report

It's weird how just two or so days ago i got into this naga/lamia mood again, and then you drop an absolutely fantastic naga story! Love how much into detail you go in the ingestion parts~ And nothing like reuniting mother with daughter in the stomach, one way or the other~

I really gotta start reading stories more often, you'rs especially. This was a treat!

Posted by PaperWriter 11 months ago Report

Guess I hit the timing right for you! XD I haven't been writing as much inhuman characters, so I really wanted to, and nagas are a lot of ~fun~

Ingestion is honestly pretty enjoyable to write, there's just so many ways it can go, based on the characters and their bodies and feelings...

Originally the story was going to have Adari pick Sarah and another prey at the same time, buuuut after talking and thinking about it I ended up with this instead, and I liked it a lot more :)

I hope you like my stories, I had a lot of fun writing them! :D

Posted by dwarfhunter 11 months ago Report

Always nice to see a goos wholesome...or well at least kind and willing naga / lamia and prey story. <3 , tho while i would personally prefer some kind of in universe reforming / revival process to make the whole living with predator / prey living in a .... vore legal world make more scense ( in my head anyways) that's just a minor nit pick .. especially when it seems like for a snek girl shes got the metabolism of a normal human!, makes you wonder how there are any cow girls left XD

But all that aside it was a great story!

Posted by PaperWriter 11 months ago Report

Personally, I don't usually go for reformation settings... they work nice for reusing characters and building vore-focused relationships, but I don't do much of that, so instead they feel like they take away the stakes and permanence of the scene, knowing everyone will just be back tomorrow. Not that I dislike reformation, it's just not my usual preference for a setting.

As for how cows are still around, some combination of low predator population and their only-occasional predatory urges helps, plus farms would of course keep breeding populations on hand, and it's not like all the predators are only going after those tasty cowgirls... Adari just has a bit of a prey preference ;)

Posted by dwarfhunter 11 months ago Report

yea i imagine a mix of low pred population / long time between meals or quick maturing speed of cows girls would be needed, but yea there just all silly nit picks of mine XD

Tho it does seem like Adari did stuff her self this time around, a good snek stuffing is always good <3

Posted by PaperWriter 11 months ago Report

Stuffing sneks is very important ^^

Originally Adari was gonna be a bit more gluttonous and take two prey away from the milking facility, but that didn't fit her personality once it started developing... so we ended up with this version, a less predatory girl with a smaller appetite... which meant I got to make her even more stuffed~

Posted by TrainerKatrine 11 months ago Report

I don't usually check out your stories, but this one had me interested!
It was a really cute read, and I can't help but be curious on if you plan on making a part two? :3

Posted by PaperWriter 11 months ago Report

I'm hoping to! ^^
I dunno if it'll be my next project or somewhere down the line, but the ending here was definitely written with a sequel in mind~

Posted by Randomdude5 11 months ago Report

Friends eating friends in a casual vore setting is sexy, and I like how well Sarah reacted to finding out she was Adari's food. Another thing I like is sexual stuff between friends when before, during, or after ingestion. Another thing I like is how polite, and respectful Adari is with her food. She even asks for Susanne's name.

Anyways, good story. I enjoyed giving my feedback on it during the writing process, and I hope it helped.

Posted by PaperWriter 11 months ago Report

It's nice when friends stay friends even when one's about to ingest and digest the other. ^^ No better time for any intrusive sexual thoughts to come to fruition~

I wanted Adari to seem like a nice, polite girl that's at least want to now her prey's name before nomming them... added bonus that it let me stop calling Susanne "Sarah's mom"

Feedback always helps :) This fuzzy head of mine can only think of so many things on its own.

Posted by IddlerItaler 10 months ago Report

"No thanks to lamias, those huge serpent women that seemed to eat anyone that got too close…"

Lamias are good sneks too!

I liked this story. Adari's reasoning for not purchasing more preys along with Sarah felt, in a certain sense, romantic. Tana casually wiping out a family offscreen was dark, especially with how she framed it as an almost inconvenience, but it certainly felt impactful. If she's meant to be your average naga pred, I can't even imagine the toll lamia preds take on this setting. Speaking of that, I smiled at Susanne's confusion and her wondering "there's a difference?". That's some good meta-humour.

"Edit: Three days after posting, and I only JUST NOW realized that this is the second time, in five whole stories, that I named a milf Susanne. Is... is my creativity for names really that bad... why have I done this..."

...Would you believe me if I told you I have an OC named Tana?

Posted by PaperWriter 10 months ago Report

Lamias are good sneks indeed, but maybe not from the perspective of a girl that can't make any friends because they've given snake-girl races a bad reputation...

Glad you enjoyed it! I know I enjoyed writing it very much~ ^^

There was definitely meant to be a feeling of romance, between their close friendship and long-hidden desires/expectations for each other, even if those desires weren't necessarily romantic, they certainly spent a lot of times thinking of each-other's bodies... :)

Tana wasn't exactly meant to be a "standard" naga pred... she's just kind of meant to embody someone that's just "too much." Drinking too much, eating too much, and she's way too much when dealing with her daughter's friends... (or prey) I felt like everything about her made a nice example of the person Adari would be trying not to be. That said, lamia in this setting (or in my thoughts in general) are kind of inspired by artists like 4KKC, where they tend to eat whole groups of people at a time... so people are right to be nervous, it just sucks for poor Adari. How are people surviving with preds like that around? Who knows, but I'm guessing there's not a lot of single-child households like Sarah's when there's lamias nearby.

I figure that people not knowing the difference between the two races was good meta humor, yeah, but also it made sense. If there's dangerous snake(girl)s around, it's easier to teach kids to stay away from all of them than to teach them to tell the dangerous ones from the harmful ones, and I guess their town is bad at teaching people the difference later...though, given Adari's family seems to be the only nagas around, that might make sense.


......is your Tana also an over-the-top naga milf?

Posted by IddlerItaler 10 months ago Report

The "evil pred race" trope is something I'm admittedly not huge on. For all their association with the monster girl genre, lamias do a decent job at subverting that as they are frequently in a prey role, including in 4KKC's drawings. I liked how as soon as Adari mulled over lamias giving nagas a bad reputation, she followed by making plans to act predatory herself, showcasing the silliness of prejudice.

And yea, there definitively has to be some suspension of disbelief, less so on how certain races manage to survive imo, and more on how they're willing to put up with other races being openly known as their predators. But I enjoyed the tale of these two high schoolers who were caught in the middle of this uncanny society, where one girl was both a student and unwittingly livestock. By contrast, I do think Adari's position, as someone who is somewhat distrusted but not at the bottom rung of the system, was fairly credible and even... relatable?

In my mind I use lamias and nagas interchangeably (which can also lead to awkward moments where I call someone's naga OC a lamia). The lamia term is slightly more associated with the monster girl genre (Monster Musume, Monster Girl Quest), so I get the idea of making them more monster-like if you have both as different races, otherwise whether a snek character is a lamia or naga is usually up to the whims of the owner. Personally I just use lamia.

My Tana is pretty far away from a milf in terms of aesthetic and personality, despite being one of the oldest characters in her setting. She is certainly over the top in certain ways, and makes your Tana look a like saint. She is not a naga nor lamia, but has history with them.

Posted by PaperWriter 10 months ago Report

I mean, lamias *are* frequently prey... but quite often they're falling prey to fellow lamias, which would reinforce their image as an overly-predatory race in my mind. but prejudice-wise, I can't really call it a showcase example; she complained about lamias eating anyone that got close, presumably meaning public situations and likely-unwilling prey, which would increase their infamy; then she went out and acquired her prey as legally and quietly as she really could (short of eating a willing friend/person, but she didn't have any) and took her prey to her home to eat in privacy, as kindly as she could. It feels, I don't know... sorta like telling someone off for eating way too much fast food, then going home and making yourself a burger; sure, you're both eating burgers, but there's a pretty notable difference in amount and method.

My brain is a little too fried at the moment to try and think through how people are living side by side with preds... (on that note sorry if any of this is incomprehensible) though that's kind of a thing in all vore settings, knowing that people might eat you. Like knowing a car might hit you, but that still doesn't stop you walking near the street... uh, anyway, back to trying to be coherent.
Adari might be in a relatable situation, but how many people would risk being slowly digested to find out whether or not she's a nice person? ...That said, I do hope to get her some new friend(s) whenever I do part two

I know that most people don't differentiate the two, and I don't honestly mind that, that's why several of my naga works are tagged with both, so more people that like sneks will find them. Over time they just kind of settled into being different races to me though, so I started trying to distinguish them in my writing.

...The fact I tried to make a character over-the-top and excessive and she looks like a saint next to yours is somehow a little worrying...

Posted by IddlerItaler 10 months ago Report

Lamias eating each other might give them a chaotic feel, but it still beats being organized apex predators who only ever eat humans or something, at least in my book.

Adari was fine being a patron for a farm which treated cowgirls like goods, and when she found out that her friend was working there, her response was to buy her so no one gets her. Of course, vore logic applies, but if Adari was to act morally she would have been way more horrified at how Sarah had been turned from a person to commodity by a hidden clause, and possibly re-examinated the ethics of her continued patronage to the farms. Unless cow-girls really are happy species-wide with the way they're treated, like Harry Potter elves, but those are so removed from our ethics that there's very little morality left to examine in that scenario.

"though that's kind of a thing in all vore settings, knowing that people might eat you. Like knowing a car might hit you, but that still doesn't stop you walking near the street..."

Yeah I get that. Gotta have basic social trust that the bus driver won't drive you off a cliff and the bartender won't poison your coffee. That kind of stuff. If anything, I kinda hate it when vore writing admonishes the prey for not being paranoid all the time like "Hahaha, you should have known better than to sit next to that big-breasted woman, that's on you for getting eaten". When the preds are clearly identifiable by their race, and say, humans are never preds, elves sometimes are and nagas always are, then the suspension of disbelief becomes harder at least for me.

I wouldn't blame people for being wary of Adari. She's a nice person, but she's a pred, and while some preds only claim willing preys or those who attack them first, Adari doesn't seem quite on that level. But I meant moreso that her position, being able to enjoy the fruits of cowgirl farming without much opposition but then facing some discrimination herself for being a naga, is a position which the vast majority of readers can feel some relation to, as most people have been on both sides of the metaphorical fence.

...Heh, most of my ideas are on the brighter end (relatively for vore stories) but sometimes I like darkness to contrast.

Posted by PaperWriter 10 months ago Report

True, preds occasionally nomming each other would definitely help stop them from gobbling up all the prey.

Random thought, not really relevant to this, but every time I think about morality in vore worlds, the phrase "morality of property" pops into my head and doesn't leave. Back to more related thoughts, morality in a vore setting feels like it would be very different. Different how; I don't know, I certainly don't live there. I do know that in my medieval settings, I haven't had a problem writing slavery and the like in; because if vore is a thing, then people are food, and food is a good, and if a good is in demand then someone will start selling it. Who knows how a world's morals might develop if thoughts like that were part of society from the start...

Yeah, people mocking prey for not watching out constantly is fun in a silly setting, but definitely doesn't work in a more serious setting. People just aren't built to be wary all the time... at some point you have to just relax and trust that if someone wants to eat you they'll at least ask first. Having racial preds does mean it's easier to know when to relax, but I do enjoy settings where anyone could potentially eat anyone and that's just how things are as well.

Ohhhhh, relatable from a reader's perspective was what you meant! Glad you thought so! I was aiming for Adari to feel like a "normal," relatable high-school girl, so I guess I got that right. ^^

Light-hearted stuff only gets better when you have some darker things to contrast~

Thanks for discussing with me like this! It's fun! ^^
Kinda curious though how the word count of us talking compares to the actual story's...