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Tags: bad end Blood body horror Bondage brat pred Brother/Sister brutal death brutal pred Callous Pred Casual pred Casual vore Cooking Cruel Pred cruelty cursed regeneration decapitation disembowelment Dismemberment Disposal extreme cruelty fantasy setting Fart Farting Fatal Female Prey fighting Gassy Pred Gore gorey gorey digestion Graphic Violence gruesome Guro Hard Vore Horrific reformation Horrified prey Human Pred Human Prey kinky pred M/F Male Pred Multiple Preys multipred murder Pain Pooping Pooping pred Post Vore Disposal Post Vore Scat prince pred Princess prey royal pred royal prey royalty Scat scat disposal snuff spoiled pred terrible immortality Unwilling Prey
Abandon all hope, to all ye who enter here.
This is my single longest, single cruelest, and single most excruciating vore story ever. It takes nine pages to even build up to the vore, and a lot of it is hard, fucked up, and gruesome. Bloody bloody body horror abound. Murder and moral misuse around.
Read the tags. If there is any story I shall urge you to do so on, let it be this. You're all adults here. Look at what lies inside this package with the tags, and opt out if you're not for it.
To the two of you that are still here, let me raise a toast to my magnum opus. I said almost a mere fortnight ago that Beauty Sleep was my longest story. Technically, that is a truth! At the time, at least.
This is a 7.1k word behemoth. I can feel the lactic acid circulate in me. I have been at this since 8 PM yesterday. It is now 1:03 AM as I am writing this. Holy shit. Ow.
In spite of all of this, I hope you all can like this longer, different style, and perhaps some of my audience likes this gorier stuff? I know at least one of you does. You know who you are ;3
Feedback highly appreciated! I worked hard on this one, and I would love genuine thoughts and responses.
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Posted by RhinoSalt 10 months ago Report
"Terrible immortality", "horrified prey", "horrific reformation"? Well, now I've gotta read this.
Posted by RhinoSalt 10 months ago Report
Read the whole thing - though I'm not into guro at all, I am into really heavy domination, and this is artistic stuff, up there with some commercial products. I can sense the spirit of creation in this, similar to what de Sade. The buildup, lead-in, payoff, and denouement all combine together to create a sense of massive despair, like a miasma permeating from the words. One of the things I've always loved about your work is how obvious your love of whatever you put down is, and this is no exception. Funnily, the part about sharp objects made me squirm more than the descriptions of being in unimaginable pain for eternity. The postscript about Charlemagne manoeuvring himself into positions of power with no real resistance is great, so many wonderful implications. I think this could be considered outsider art.
Posted by Hoots 10 months ago Report
I'm utterly charmed by all of this praise~ Being able to bring you in even though you're not into the gorier bits is a delightful thing, part of my intention with the longer form. Super glad my love for this sort of thing came through well, and I definitely love that you enjoyed the postscript.
Also, being compared to de Sade is something a little sadomasochist like me could only dream of, ehe~
Posted by RhinoSalt 10 months ago Report
For sure. You're my favourite M-pred author, one of the reasons being how visceral your prose is, like making the act of taking a shit extremely sexual *in the text itself*, not just being added through context and paratext.