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At UA, a hero-in-training was wandering the campus very hungry for something nice and big. The student is Mina Ashido, fifteen years old and a member of Class 1-A which was rather famous for some of her classmates. 
 GGGRROOOOWWWWWWWLLLLL
 Her slightly pudgy belly let out a groan, making sure she knew it was starving. The pink-skinned girl pouted, narrowing her black and gold eyes. “Jeez, I'm starving…” Whined Mina. Mina turned a corner, with her short skirt bouncing as the bottom of her ass poked out. Her boobs were on the verge of snapping from the white blouse as well. Mina then saw her, a girl with long blonde hair, two large ram-like horns, a fat ass showing more skin than her and a nice chest. Mina recognized her as Pony Tsunotori from class 1-B. “Oh~♡. You know, I've never seen her look just so…appetizing.” Thought Mina. Mina couldn't help it, the American looked delicious. Mina rubbed her belly, it wanted her and Mina had just the idea to get this dumb American in her belly.
  Mina made her move, sneaking up behind her and grabbing her waist. “EEP!! Huh!?! Oh you're Mina, from class 1-A. Um…what can I do for you?” Asked Pony. Mina's barely ever spoken to Pony so it wasn’t a surprise Pony was a little confused. “Hehe, I had a fun idea! Since you're a transfer, I know of a perfect way to enhance your time here.” Said Mina. Pony was immediately interested, almost shoving her face into Mina's face. “Oh!! What is it!?!” Said Pony. Mina giggled, pushing the girl back to being flat on her feet. “A spa!! There's a great place nearby and it also has a hot spring. It'd be perfect.” Said Mina. Pony had stars in her eyes from excitement and thirty minutes later, Mina and Pony were naked with some white towels on their shoulders. Their thick assets were big enough to make adult women jealous of them, but at the moment there wasn't a soul around. “We have to get all cleaned up first, here I'll scrub you~♡.” Giggled Mina. Pony wasn't hesitant at all and shook her head. She plopped on a small stool as Mina kneeled behind her.
  Mina got soap on her hands and smiled, putting some of her acidic power into the soap. She immediately groped Pony's chest, making the girl yelp and blush. Mina licked Pony's earlobe and whispered into it. “Don't worry, this is a part of the culture here.” Whispered Mina. Mina coated Pony's boobs in soap and her hidden acid until suds completely covered her nipples. Mina continued rubbing her acid and soap all over Pony's pale skin, coating every inch of her in her acid. Mina cupped a boob again, then used her other hand to rub around Pony's thigh. Pony could feel an odd tingling sensation, but she felt good. Mina's groping and rubbing were amazing. Mina moaned in Pony's ear, rubbing her boobs all over Pony's back. “I-Is this…really part of your culture?” Moaned Pony. Mina nodded her head, licking the back of her neck. “Mhm, just two girls bathing…just wait…the real fun will begin soon~♡.” Moaned Mina. Mina pushed in Pony's nipple, making the American yelp, before squishing and rubbing her thighs.
  Mina used her acids, coating those gooey thighs and was rubbing them into her skin. Pony was a little goopy, but nothing she would notice at the moment. Pony had her eyes closed, huffing and moaning as Mina basically violated her. “Oh Mina…where did you learn to make a girl's body tingle all over~♡.” Moaned Pony. Mina giggled, whispering in her ear. “You could say I was born with the ability~♡.” Moaned Mina. Pony didn't know what to think, but soon something felt off. Pony was feeling weak physically, and her thighs had been groped for much longer than they needed to be. “H-hey Mina you can-EEP!!” Yelped Pony, feeling a sharp sting in her thighs. Looking down, Pony saw a horrific sight. Her pale, meaty thighs were missing the flesh. Red muscle was left, and Pony pushed Mina away and tried to run. Immediately, the pain was too intense as she put weight on her thighs and fell. Mina laughed, grabbing the shower head and washing all the suds off of Pony. Pony saw her flesh was all goopy in a few places. “WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!” Screamed Pony, as Mina looked down at her. “I told you, there is a great hot spring, but you get to go to a much better one~♡.” Said Mina, making her belly jiggle as water came off the pink middle.
  Mina kneeled down, grabbing Pony's feet, feeling her hands sink a little into Pony's flesh. “My acid is pretty awesome, I can hide it and slowly melt you to make you easier to swallow~♡. Now, get in my belly~♡.” Moaned Mina. Mina opened her mouth, bringing both feet inside. Pony let out a yelp as her feet were licked and slobbered one. Droplets of melted flesh dripped on Mina's tongue, with the pink-skinned girl swallowing the flesh first. “MINA STOP!! DON’T EAT ME!! A HERO WOULDN'T DO THIS!!” Screamed Pony. Mina just gave Pony a wink, ignoring her cries and gulping her feet whole.
 GGGGLLLRRKKK UUUULLLLPPPP
 The tight throat squeezed around Pony's feet and the start of her calves. As her gooey flesh squelched, the blonde let out a cry. Mina's eyes rolled back, enjoying the flavor of melted and solid flesh inside her mouth. 
 SSSSLLLUUURRPP UUUULLLLPPP
 More sloppy flesh slipped down, along with Pony's calves being completely gulped. As she was pulled against the ground, a trail of her melted body was forming. “OH GOD!! WHY!?! WHY MINA!?!” Screamed Pony. A groan sounded from Mina's belly, it wanted to feel that American inside it already.
  Mina rubbed those muscle thighs, seeing the red flesh. A gulp pulled them into her mouth, with the tightness pressing down on them making Pony scream. “AAAGGHHH!!! IT HURTS IT HURTS IT HURTS!!! STOOPPPP!!” Cried Pony. Mina found the screaming to be hilarious, and just happily swallowed them in. 
 CRRRRCCCCKK GGLLLRRRRKKKK
 As Mina swallowed, Pony's left femur snapped, making the tears practically pour from the American's eyes as she let out a screech of horror. Mina's throat was full of sloppy thigh meat, but her stomach was collecting the feet and legs of her meal. The pink hands squished into Pony's wide waist, pulling the last of her thighs in. The fat, gooey rump plopped on Mina's lips. “PLEASE MINA!! SPARE ME!! I'LL KEEP MY MOUTH SHUT!!” Cried Pony. Mina didn't care, stretching her jaws and stuffing that soft meat into her mouth. It was like having multiple watermelons in her mouth, as Mina chewed and played with those buns. “I was right~♡. The moment I saw her I knew this ass was going to be deliciou~♡.” Thought Mina. Mina stuffed the fighting hands of her blonde meat into her throat and tilted her head back.
  UUUULLLPPP GGGGLLLRRRKKK
 Pony's ass sank into the tight throat, with her pelvis almost breaking from how tight it was. “OW OW OW!! IT HURTS SO MUCH!!” Cried Pony. Mina grabbed onto the girl's frame, pulling her body deeper. Pony's perfectly toned belly was so easy, with Mina's tongue lapping up the delicious flesh. “Mmmfff, she just gets better the more I eat.” Thought Mina. 
 SSSSLLLUURRPP UUULLLLPPPP
 Mina's pink belly was already fat, with the legs curling inside and that fat ass joining them. Pony's feet were lodged into her ass cheeks, with her heels pressing right into her pucker. “STOP!! WAAAAAHHH!! I'M NOT FOOD!!” Sobbed Pony. Mina's mouth moved over Pony's chest, pressing down on her lungs as pushing the air right out. Pony gasped, before looking down and finding her shoulders had vanished and just her head remained. “WAIT MINA!! W-WE CAN BE FRIENDS!! JUST THROW ME UP!!” Begged Pony. Mina just looked into Pony's eyes seductively, pushing on her blonde head with one finger. Pony's screams were muffled, with her head being squashed.
  Pony's head made a perfect lump in Mina's throat, with the tips of her horns still sticking out. Mina pushed her down until both tips were out of view and closed her mouth.
 GGGGUUUULLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP
 Pony slipped down, sobbing the whole way as she was crammed in that tight, smelly gut. Mina let out a sigh of relief, feeling the American fill her stomach and officially become her meal. Pony had a fat bulge, with her ass and feet at the bottom, her back pushing out the front, with her horns at the top. “Phew~♡. I didn't want those horns stabbing my gullet. Luckily my stomach is pretty strong so you can't stab me~♡.” Giggled Mina.
 UUUUUUURRRRRRRPPPPPPPPPP
 Mina burped, with a few gooey splats of saliva and softened flesh mixed together hitting the ground. Mina gave her meals ass a good spank and easily stood up. Pony's bulge sagged just about Mina'a knees as the pink-skinned girl walked to the hot spring. She dipped her feet in, gasping at the great feeling. Mina's fat thighs and the start of her belly followed, before the rest of her got in the hot spring. Mina rested at the edge, with the top half of her gut exposed. “Aahhh…yeah…a bath after a big meal is the best.” Moaned Mina, implying this wasn't her first time doing this.
  Inside the tight belly of the class 1-A girl, Pony was huffing, as the oxygen supply was very slim inside Mina. “Oh god…oh god!! She ate me!! I'm in her s-stomach!! What do I do!?!” Cried Pony. Pony could only imagine that the normal digestive process would occur, which would obviously end in her death. That thought made more tears run down, but as she had time before death was going to occur, she needed to get out. “I'll fight!! I can get out!!” Yelped Pony. Pony pushed her horns against the stomach walls, but they didn't stab through at all. They just made the belly walls move and drip acid that was forming. More acid was forming in Mina's belly, and it started to burn very quickly. “GAAAHHH!! IT BURNS!! IT'S SO HOT!!!” Cried Pony. Pony was sweating profusely, with her flesh melting away and dripping into the acid pool forming around her ass. Mina had her stomach acid set to a strength where Pony will be melted into bones and goop within an hour. It was already working, Pony was melting and it was very painful.
  Pony looked back down, seeing the acid pass her curled up knees. Her pupils shrank, it was hell seeing that bubbling, horrible liquid submerging more of her body. “MINA LET ME OUT!! I DON’T WANT TO BE DIGESTED!! OH GOD PLEASE LET ME OUT!!” Sobbed Pony. Pony could feel it, the acid was working quick and tearing away at her already softened flesh. Globs of Pony's pale skin was peeling away and showing off her muscle, but even that wasn't lasting long. “IT BURNS SO MUCH!!! PLLEEAAASSEEEEE!!” Cried Pony.
 The stomach squeezed in, making her yelp as her bones almost snapped from the pain. The tips of her horns broke off, but the horns still stayed mostly intact. Her feet were being ripped apart under the acid, churning to bone in just a short five minutes.
 GGGLLOOORRPP BLOOORRRPPP
 Pony tried calling for help from anyone else, but Mina's stomach walls kept her muffled down. Even then, this Spa area was rarely used so no one heard her previous screams either. Pony and Mina were alone, which meant the American was doomed.
  Mina was completely relaxed in the hot spring. Her prey screamed at the top of her lungs, but all Mina heard were muffled sounds she couldn't make anything out of. 
 HHHRRRMMPPHH GGLLOOORRPP
 The churning of her stomach was even louder, filling the empty space up and even echoing a little. “It was so easy to lure you here~♡. You trusted me completely and look where that led you. A one way trip in my digestive tract.” Giggled Mina. Mina stroked her fingers over the dulled tips of Pony's horns. She could feel those small, weak hands stretch the sides of her stomach out. Mina got a look at those bulging hands, seeing they had little skeletal bits exposed. “Your life is shortening every second, if you want to live you're going to have to fight harder than that!” Said Mina.
 SSSPLLOOORRPP BBBWWRBBLLL
 The water in the hot spring rippled to every little movement from the thrashing prey. Mina just giggled, watching her belly lose shape and break her fellow hero student down.
  “GGAAAAAAAHHHH!!!! PLEEEASSSEEEEEE!!” Screamed Pony. The blonde was still screaming as her lungs and throat began to burn. The horrible fumes of the stomach seeped into her body, making her insides burn and itch. Pony's hips were dipped under the acid, with more of her body falling apart. Her fatty rear was turning to mush as the flesh was torn off. Her thighs that had been turned to muscle had melted down to the bone, with her broken femur sticking out of the acid. Pony could see the tip of the broken bone looking at her and it made her sob.
 CCCHHUUURRNN GGGLLLRRRPPP
 Pony's body was already in a pretty badly digested condition, with surviving becoming less and less likely of an option. “DAMN YOU MINA!! WHY!?! WHY ME!?! WE'RE NOT EVEN CLASSMATES!? AM I REALLY JUST FOOD TO YOU!?!” Cried Pony. Pony cried until her tear ducts dried up, leaving her just screaming in pain. Pony had only spent twenty minutes in Mina's stomach, but she was already on the verge of death from one clean neck snap.
  Mina poked at the sloshing body of her meal, just giggling as the flesh was so easily melting away. “My stomach is so much stronger than you~♡. That's just a little pathetic don't you think?” Teased Mina. Mina got pained screaming as an answer and just rolled her eyes. “Is that all you can do? Scream? You'll really end up as my turds if you do that!” Mocked Mina. 
 BBBLLOOORRPPP MMMMPPHHHH
 Of course, Mina had zero intention of letting the blonde leave her stomach as anything more than a turd. Mina pushed up at Pony's butt, feeling as those cheeks crumbled at her grasp. They were so soft it was like touching jello, they broke apart to soft, gooey chunks and kept making the green acid rise inside her. Mina bit down on her lower lip as she managed to touch Pony's pelvis. The bone was still solid, but it was funny to Mina that it was already this easy to grasp it. “That body of yours is way past being saved~♡. You'll die even if I did throw you up. You might as well just accept your fat as food and become my bowel movement.” Said Mina. Mina loved being cruel and mentally torture her prey, it really made her pussy wet.
  Mina pushed a little too hard on Pony's right arm, feeling the flesh completely slide off her upper arm. A little harder, then finally a horrid, wet CRCK sounded.
 HHHRRRMMPPHH MMMMPPPHHHH
 Cries of pain as loud as when Pony's femur snapped sounded. “Oops~♡. You're just so weak a little poking is all it takes to break you apart. Sorry, but not really. Break and die my little American made meal.” Giggled Mina. Inside, poor Pony had to watch as the white bone cracked, finally snapping in half. Her arm was gone, devoid of all flesh and floating in the disgusting mixture of flesh and acid. “I'M DYING!! SOMEONE HELP!! SHE'S INSANE!! HURRY BEFORE I'M DEAD!!” Cried Pony. Pony held onto a sliver of hope, not that it even mattered. Her lower half was completely churned down to the bone. All her pale flesh and red muscle was in a mixed slurry of bubbling goop. She could barely even feel the burning around legs. “THIS CAN'T BE!! I CAN'T DIE!! I WANT TO BE A HERO!! I WANT TO HELP PEOPLE!!” Screamed Pony.
  Pony's dreams and aspirations to become a hero in Japan were being  completely melted along with her body. A sudden slap by the mean pink girl hit Pony's other arm, crunching it up and tearing it in half. Pony had lost both arms now, leaving her upper half with just some sloppy meat and her head. “OH GOD NO!! MY ARMS!!!” Cried Pony. Pony's chest was starting to slide down to her soft belly, with her pink nipples having already been ripped off and melted. The entire rib cage soon was exposed as the boobs were gone. “Fuck…no!” Yelped Pony. Pony was getting extremely weak. She couldn't scream even as she tried, with just a soft, raspy yell coming out. “No, wait…help…hurry!” Muttered Pony. Pony was dangerously close to her own death, as the acid passed her belly and was seeping into her exposed rib cage. “Agh…my lungs…my heart…” Grunted Pony. Pony's innards were being attacked by the harsh acids, as they melted her essential organs she needed to survive.
  Her belly had already popped open, with her guts spilling out of her. Her intestines didn't even make it to the top lining of the acid, they melted into formless slush before they could. Pony's raspy breathing made her lungs burn just as much as the acid. “S-save me! I'm…still alive.” Groaned Pony. Pony felt the acid at her head, with the heat melting her face away. “M-my face…stop…not a…meal.” Muttered Pony. Pony begged Mina, but her voice was completely dominated and muffled by the loud groaning of digestion. Mina's cheeks tore as she tried to speak, and a SPLOOSH sounded as her lower jaw fell off. The acid rose, going into her gullet and she ended up breathing the acid into her softening lungs. The acid worked from both inside and outside, until they just burst. Finally, Pony died and was able to escape the horrid pain Mina had put her through for the last hour. Pony's destroyed body and melting skull went under the bubbling acid, with just the horns sticking out.
 CCRRRUNNCCHH BLLOOORRRPPP
  Mina's gut was much rounder, with little to no bulges left of Pony. Mina chuckled, giving her round, sloshing belly a few slaps on the side. The surface of the water and her gut both rippled from the slapping. “Heh, done already? I guess you were just as weak as I thought you were. Japan doesn't need any more wannabe heroes anyway.” Teased Mina. The cauldron full of former hero meat bubbled and broke down the last scraps of flesh on Pony's bones. Nothing remained, her eyes, guts and face even melted away. Her bones were picked clean by Mina's acid. Under the water, Mina's belly was bulging with Pony's bones. Her skull stretched it out, with both horns still on top. Mina rubbed her churning belly, as it was getting ready to send the mulched girl down south to become smelly excrement. “I'm sure you'll make a wonderful turd~♡.” Moaned Mina, pushing her belly down to feel those bony bulges rub against her pussy.
  The gut let out some grumbles, before the finished girl started to move through Mina's winding intestines. Mina let her tongue flop out and looked up at the ceiling as her belly was emptied of her meal. “Oohhh yeah that's the stuff~♡. Make me all fat you second rate trainee!” Moaned Mina. Mina's half bony, half round gut was shrinking, bit by bit the gut began to vanish under the water surface. Mina's chest was already very meaty, but a good amount of Pony ended up as milker filler. Mina's chest dipped in the water, with her round nipples disappearing. Mina ended up with a K-cup size, but it wasn't just her chest that landed some fat. The area Mina was sitting became softer and more plush as her rump and thighs got fatter. Her ass doubled, gaining all that fat Pony had on her ass. “Oh fuck yes~♡. You really wanted to be a part of this body!!” Cheered Mina. In the end, Pony was drained from the slimy gut and Mina was a much thicker girl, left with a round belly of pudge.
 BBBRRRRAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPP
 Digestion and absorption ended with a gassy belch, and Mina smiled.
  Mina got up, with her new assets in full view. Her pink skin shined from all the water on her body. “Oh yeah~♡. You really did a number on me, it'll take some time to work this belly off, but these curves are definitely staying~♡.” Giggled Mina. Mina slapped her newly fattened belly and got out of the hot spring. Her boobs bounced and flopped like they never had before. Her butt was so fat the cheeks ended up clapping together from just casually walking. Mina stopped, looking back and squishing her fat ass cheeks together. That bubble-gum booty was simply to die for, and Mina was going to make sure more people die and become a part of it. 
 FFFFFFFFRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTT
 Mina's fun groping time was rudely interrupted by Pony's last scream coming out as a rotten smelling fart. “Ew!! You smell horrible, but you are my shit now so that makes sense.” Said Mina. Mina thought about going to a bathroom, but she shrugged and just decided to plop Pony's remains on the ground. Mina bent over, spreading her fat pink ass cheeks, until her slightly darker pink asshole was completely exposed.
  “Time to come back out~♡.” Moaned Mina. Mina squeezed, feeling Pony's remains pushing right into her asshole. She grunted, feeling as the pucker slowly opened wider and wider. The brown, smelly new form of the blonde hero was finally showing. As the turd slipped out, brown lumps were covering it. Strands of blonde hair stuck out of the brown, alongside some white shards of whatever bones they used to be. “Hhhnnnghhh!! Yeah!! Keep coming!! No need to lounge in my bowels!” Grunted Mina. The shattered bones of Pony's arms were sticking out of the brown mush, with one hand completely torn in half. The bones were badly broken, with sharp points coming out. Three feet of shit had already left Mina's anus, with another foot coming as Pony's spinal cord showed up. The tips were buried in the brown log, but the rest was exposed. “Mmmmfff, yeah…here we go…one loaf…done!!” Moaned Mina, feeling as one log of shit came out. The first remains of the dead hero plopped on the ground, steaming up a storm. Mina looked back, seeing the bones in the disgusting loaf of shit and just giggled at it.
  “Heh, I knew it, you made a great turd…now let's get the rest of you out.” Moaned Mina. Mina pushed, feeling her pucker opening again. Pony's pelvis pushed out, with a thicker log sliding out after it. The turd was easily as thick as Mina's thighs, straining her butthole as it seeped out. “Jeez girl!! You made such a massive turd!! So much shit left of you!!” Groaned Mina.
 PLLLLOOORRRPP SSPLLAAAAPPP
 The log connected with the forming pile, coiling around and pushing down on the bones already exposed. The pelvis shattered, before Pony's rib cage started to show. Mina whipped her head back, letting out loud moans to mask the wet slapping of shit. Pony's rib cage wasn't missing a single rib, it was completely intact even moving through Mina's intestine didn't shatter it. It moved along with the coil, with ribs slowly being buried as shit piled on it. Mina shuddered as the second turd came out, plopping down on the pile. The turd pile was already a solid three feet high, smelling of rotten eggs. “Just a bit more, then you can finally start your new life as dumped bowel movement.” Moaned Mina.
  Mina was ready to be done with Pony for good, pushing out the last of her remains. One last fat log stretched her anus out, with the broken shards of her legs sticking out. Her feet had completely been demolished by Mina's gut, with nothing to show of them left. The log came out a solid two feet, until the final bone was finally coming out. Pony's skull was revealing itself, but it was squeezing out with a fight. “GAAH!! WHAT THE HELL PONY!?!” Yelled Mina, feeling those annoying horns scraping by her rectum. It caused Mina a bit of pain, but she got them cleared and the rest was easy. The blonde hair that remained on her shit-coated scalp was all dirty and messed up. Her eye sockets were cracked and full of shit. Her lower jaw was gone and her teeth were almost completely missing. The turd flopped on the pile and Pony was dumped. Mina took a deep breath and rubbed her stinging anus. “You damn forgettable loser, making my ass hurt. Well, you're worthless shit now anyway. Bye bye~♡.” Said Mina, cleaning her ass with a shower head and leaving the spa.
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A commission made for Kiwicoal
Art by Citez

First of a few My Hero stories:3
I'll literally never get bored of writing this series~♡. Got 2 more finished stories that will be posted this week most likely! I'll have a fully updated queue soon as well!

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DodongoQueen3

Posted by DodongoQueen3 9 months ago Report

Funny
I found you doing mha fan fics. Your still doing them


All that’s changed is how well you write them
I’m glad you gift us your amazing talent


Especially this one

Coolwoman

Posted by Coolwoman 9 months ago Report

Hehe glad you really like them!

DodongoQueen3

Posted by DodongoQueen3 9 months ago Report

I do
I hope one day I can commission you but ugh. Not money yet but when I do

Meruem

Posted by Meruem 9 months ago Report

Do we have eri in the next 3 bnha fics?

SoloRin

Posted by SoloRin 9 months ago Report

Oh, I hope so

Ragon

Posted by Ragon 9 months ago Report

Your talent always surprises me