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(A couple notes: first, content warning that there are brief references to/descriptions of sexual assault here. Second, while it's not CW-worthy, Karlach here is depicted as a woman with a penis: if that's not your thing, please refrain from leaving rude comments.)
Having a gluttonous lesbian dark elf as your party leader is dangerous when she's chosen you as her next meal. And embarrassing when your party seems all too aware of it.
However, in coming to terms with it, Shadowheart has to struggle with whether she finds being drow food a bad thing... and faces some unexpected opposition from another source than her predator.
A sequel to Emerald Grove Dining (https://aryion.com/g4/view/1011355), but should not require it as context.
There is also a second "chapter" (both because this got too long - this part is ~8500 words - and to provide a happier ending), but for those who prefer a fatal and darker ending to reformation, you're welcome to treat this as the end of the story.
The very nice thumbnail art is by Paulina Klime: https://x.com/PaulinaKlime/status/1715303554003472451
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Posted by DeliciousReya 9 months ago Report
Some really fantastic work here <3 I absolutely love what you've done with the vorish dynamics of the three girls from the game, with Karlach and Lae'zel and Shadowheart each having different outlooks on vore (and sex!) and Shadowheart getting mercilessly teased by Lae'zel! Plus your drow girl, Ziavra, is an extremely hot pred and the teasing definitely got me VERY much hot and also bothered. 10/10 work!!!
Posted by RadiantRia 9 months ago Report
Thank you very much! For the sweet comments both here and on Discord <3
Posted by WoreHouse 9 months ago Report
Nice work. From start to finish. All this teasing and play between pred and prey... mmm~
For me, some of the most satisfying moments were when Shadowheart gave up her little plan to resist her fate and willingly gave herself up to the drow. Maybe it's just my love of willing prey, but either way, that moment ignited something inside me. Also, the foreplay and swallowing scenes turned out to be very hot.
Among the minor cons of the story, I would include all the effects of the goddess Shar. All that pain from the mark was preventing the main character from enjoying being melted and turned into a nutritious soup inside Ziavra's tummy, so, imho, this theme was a little unnecessary here. But in no way am I telling you how or what you should write, this is just my little humble opinion.
Well, this is not a minus or a plus, just a small idea. I would like to see more interaction between the main character and Karlach, in terms of teasing or even sexual activity, but this is probably more of an idea for a separate full-fledged story.
Although I usually prefer fatal endings, the second part was also quite enjoyable to read. I'm interested to know how this story will develop further.
Anyway, thanks for giving us all the opportunity to read this wonderful story. You created really high quality material!
Posted by RadiantRia 9 months ago Report
Thank you!
Yeah, that's an entirely fair perspective on all the Shar parts. I do generally prefer having a fully enjoyable digestion when I lean into that, but for 'lore reasons' I did think Shadowheart's goddess would object and strongly (and Shar does tie into future writing I have in mind for these two).
I can certainly see why that would detract from people's enjoyment reading the digestion, though, - it was sort of supposed to, but I do get how that's not what one would be necessarily looking for. If it helps, I do plan to write further stories that detail the melting into nutritious soup without pain and suffering involved. (though no judgement to my friends who I do know like painful digestion)
I do have a story with Karlach and Shadowheart in the works too, so if you did like their interactions I'd keep an eye out. :)
Posted by WoreHouse 8 months ago Report
I don't mind pain as such, for example my favorite vore-story is nothing but scenes in which the main character experiences only pain and discomfort from digestion, and also psychological masochistic pleasure from all this. I meant that this theme itself with phantoms of pain... I don't know how to describe it exactly, but it distracts from the process of digestion itself.
Mmm... you intrigue me! I will eagerly await the opportunity to read these works you are talking about ;)
Posted by Dooot 8 months ago Report
Your ability to write preds that are seductive but also act as though they already own the prey and can do whatever they want to them regardless of what they want is top-notch!
Posted by Narkct 2 months ago Report
You truly are one of (if not the best) writer(s) on this whole site. Not in terms of just writing carnally enjoyable text, but when writing a coherent and plausible story, too.