I liked the idea so much that I decided to make a series of short stories to follow it up.

I don't think it's necessary to explain this, but I still will: There are some weird things in the way it's written since it's Lillie who is writing the letter to Eliot, her boyfriend. So at first she feels excited about it, giving all sorts of details that a polite girl would, and as she explains more and more, the narrative feels short and insufficient. The idea is that, as the volumes increase, the detail of the letters will increase greatly.

And anyway, thanks to one of you for giving me the idea and for participating!

Sorry for the grammar or spelling.

13 August 2024: Commissions still open

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