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Next, I've redrawn a panel from the Michelle comic "Vore Dreams" to see how I've improved since it was submitted! What aspects do you guys notice the most?
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Posted by HyanVore 7 months ago Report
RTX ON
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Posted by Tanookicatoon 7 months ago Report
It's always fun going over old things with the skills you have gained today.
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Posted by PrismaticAria 7 months ago Report
What aspect? That's hard to narrow down when so many different details all coalesce into such a dynamic piece. Instead, I'll go down a list of things as I notice them.
First, though your color grading seems mostly consistent with this piece, the effective use of more dynamic shading adds a layer of complexity that was completely absent in the original.
Combine that with a more complex background and ability to clearly distinguish individual branches amongst the shrubbery, and the perspective of the character makes her feel more involved in the surroundings, as well as significantly smaller than she originally seemed. Now, she's definitely fox-sized, rather than bush-sized.
Shading is improved, obviously, but in a unique way when applied to the body. Now, you use shading as a way to give both texture and volume to Michelle's anatomy in a way absent from the original piece. Not to mention, the musculature is overhauled, in such a way that you can reasonably pick out individual muscle groups, and possibly even imagine the underlying tissue.
But the detail I most enjoy has to be the touch of fluidity added with the smear lines around her belly. You can really feel the heft of all that weight suddenly surging into her stomach, the poor creature inside still influenced by inertia and gravity, but stopped cold in their tracks by the powerful muscles holding them just above the ground.
All in all, there's been bounds and leaps in your artistic ability over the years, almost to the point where you could teach a less jaded art student the basics of what makes good art better with just this comparison alone!
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Posted by FidchellVore 7 months ago Report
Thank you for taking the time to write this, I appreciate your analysis!
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Posted by Worthy 7 months ago Report
Wow. Your art has really improved over time. It looks amazing now
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Posted by Kevinben01 7 months ago Report
I like tail before but nice improvements
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Posted by Wolfsage 7 months ago Report
Always nice to get more of Michelle.
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Posted by ItsJD 7 months ago Report
The main thing I see is a better depiction of depth in the image. Each feature of the character looks less flat compared to the old pic.
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Posted by WatermelonArtist 7 months ago Report
Bro somehow improved on peak
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Posted by Kuney 7 months ago Report
I really, really wish you'd redraw that Krystal soulvore series with the Krazoa spirit. Your improved self would certainly make it far better than it is now.
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