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Coiled Into Coils 1/4 (comic/writing, scat) By foxyoreos -- Report

Tiger snakes have such interesting feeding habits, and Fluttershy is about to find that out first-hoof. What a fun opportunity for her! <3

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I am so, so excited to start sharing these :3

This is page 1 of a 4 page comic commission by  Dimalad featuring a tiger snake enjoying (and disposing of X3) a very big meal. >w< It's one of the more ambitious commissions I've taken yet, but the rough drafts have been a blast to do and the final versions have been going really well <3 Working with Dimalad is always a pleasure, he's great at latching onto ideas and expanding on them. If you've enjoyed the pony art I've done recently, you pretty much have him to thank for getting me back into that setting <3

If the first page catches your interest and you're curious to get a sneak peak at what's coming up, the full rough drafts for the entire comic are available on Subscribestar right meow (https://subscribestar.adult/posts/1435849). Final pages (with some minor edits and layout improvements) will also be posted there first while I take time to finish writing the accompanying stories. I'm aiming to finish one page each month :3

And if you're curious about what's going on with Trixie and Starlight? There'll be an internal version of this page showing up publicly within the next few days ;3c

Anyway, story starts below:

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Story Start
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The furst thing to know about tiger snakes is that they're big: long, thick coils of sinuous muscle that hang down from branches and run across the forest floor. And female snakes get even bigger! Tiger snakes are more than capable of multitasking, so any creature that crosses paths with that long body is getting wrapped up nice and snug even if the rest of her is otherwise "occupied"~ Maybe if Fluttershy knew that, she wouldn't assume that just because a bush is making noise that the thing inside of it isn't also creeping up behind her~

Oopsies! :3c Lucky for Ms Snake, Fluttershy doesn't know that much about her new host's feeding habits. Oh well, now she does. X3c

The snake wraps up Fluttershy securely and lovingly in her coils and gets the pegasus nice and comfy while she finishes with her current prey. Aww, don't be scared Fluttershy, isn't this fascinating? You get the best seat in the house to watch how your predator takes care of squirmy prey

Tiger snakes are opportunistic hunters, gorging themselves on food whenever it's available. But that doesn't mean they don't like to have a little fun with their victims~ And it seems that Ms Snake wanted to show off a little with this catch and brag a little about how wide she could open her jaws! x3 It's hard to blame her; with two succulent, plump ponies squirming in her grasp how could she possibly decide which one would go first? She's spent nearly ten minutes now just tasting them, squeezing them, licking up and down their entire body, enjoying the way they whimper and call for help. The snake doesn't try to silence her prey. She wants other ponies to hear them and come running. She wants her food to come to her, just like this tasty-looking pegasus just did. If she's lucky, she'll get a full course meal! UwU

But her stomach is rumbling, and Fluttershy's approach is the final signal she needs to finally send both ponies down to their fates so that she can get them softening and get her tummy ready for her follow-up course~. Trixie and Starlight did a good job struggling and screaming, but play time is over, or she'll have too many ponies in her coils to enjoy at once :3c

The two ponies vanish in tight, quick gulps and the snake's throat bulges out to accommodate them. It's a tight fit! As they disappear down, tiny fangs at the top and bottom of the snake's jaws prick them over and over. The snake doesn't inject much venom, just enough to keep its prey compliant and well behaved. Tiger snakes carry a strong paralyzing venom that suppresses extreme movements and nervous responses. In high dosages it can reduce even a full-grown tiger or a bear to a limp toy. But in small dosages it helps keep prey calmer so that they don't have a panic attack or flail too wildly (while still allowing them to squirm and fidget miserably inside of their predator~)

As a side effect, the decreased nervous system responses keep digestion from hurting while still allowing the prey to feel all of the tiny, more subtle sensations of their body liquefying. The snake doesn't really care about whether its prey digest in agony or not, but the venom keeps them well behaved and docile, so it's happy to give both ponies a little dose while they slide down. Their bodily functions slow and stabilize, making it easier for the snake to keep them alive as they're digesting. The snake likes that part too, her entire digestive track is lined with sensitive muscle that picks up on the tiniest flickers of movement. The snake likes when her prey go fully quiet and she can relax and listen to their heart beat and small little breaths while she takes the time to thoroughly process them~

Trixie and Starlight splash down into the stomach now <3 Once they're softer, Ms Snakie will be very careful not to crush them or mush them up too much :3c She's so considerate that way! <3 But as they go into the stomach, Ms Snake is very annoyed at them! >w< They barely fit! She's going to have to rush their digestion, so she's a bit rougher squeezing them in through the sphincter into the stomach. They get a very tight squeeze like getting a nice strong hug one last time before their tummy time :3c Then the stomach is flooded with powerful acids. The acids also contain a mild anesthetic. By the time the snake's venom has worn off, the acid will have worked its way into the pony's skin and disolved enough of their body to have a similar effect. They'll be able to feel their body turning into goo, but won't have the strength or the nervous response to struggle or experience much real pain.

And that's good for them because this snake does not intend to be gentle with them. >:3 They're going to get the express tour! Ms Snake releases a chunk of the remaining air from her stomach and the already tight space collapses down and gets right to work roughly massaging acid into their bodies. Both ponies splutter a little as they find their faces pressed into each others intimate areas. Starlight has the feeling that she's going to be very familiar with Trixie's ass and pussy before all this is done :3c

But we should leave them alone now for some privacy~ :3c

The air travels back up the throat and the snake releases it in a long sigh, right in Fluttershy's face. She opens her mouth nice and wide, like she just showed the little pony a magic trick. "Check it out! Allll gone~" The stale breath wafts around Fluttershy. It's been on a long journey, all the way down with the two ponies, into the tummy, then back up the throat and out it goes! It's like a preview of the journey that Fluttershy is going to take! <3 She can smell the snake's foul breath, the sweat and odor of her friends, the slighly acidic tang of the stomach acid, all mixed together into a subtle cocktail. It's warmer than Fluttershy expected. From the outside the snake feels cool to the touch, but deeper in her coils she feels a little sweaty. The snake has obviously been sunning itself, and her insides are steamy and active, eager to grind over pony flesh..

Fluttershy can't look away. She just stares ahead, stares down that throat. She can't do anything but tremble as the tongue slides over her, and then as she's slipped down the throat. Daww, she's all nervous~ What a little cutie <3

It's going to be a little while before Ms Snakie's tummy is ready for a new guest~ It can barely accomodate its two current guests! So the snake holds Fluttershy halfway down her throat and passes some time sliding its tongue over her buttocks and privates, giving her playful little nips and enjoying how plump and suptle and juicy she tastes. Fluttershy kicks with the best of her strength (Ms Snake hasn't really dosed her with her paralytic medicine yet X3) while she's violated. The snake starts out just tasting her taint, but then slides its tongue fully into the pussy, enjoying her internal flavor. Fluttershy can't see anything, but she's sweating in the snake's hot gullet and she can hear groans and burbles coming from below her and smell the rank acidic air rising up over her face.

Fluttershy isn't sure how long it's been going on, she's lost track of time being such a good little plaything. But suddenly the snake pauses. It sounds like more guests are on the way~

Hmmm... a little sooner than Ms Snakie wants, but she can't complain about another free meal. Without any hesitation, the snake injects a small dose of venom and then casually gulps Fluttershy's body down in a single, quick motion. She's done with her toy now, and her stomach is almost ready for a new guest.. she mashes the current occupants together (mushing them up just a liiittle bit further) and then begins to push them into her bowels. She's annoyed at needing to speed them along, but also enjoying being able to be rougher with them. It's a little bit fun, normally she's so thorough with her prey! :3c

The two ponies don't complain much; her acid has really done the trick at negating any pain they'd feel. But they do make soft little whimpers and their hearts speed up in fear as they're squeezed even tighter together while exiting the stomach. The walls hold them firmly and their acid bath gets pumped into the intestines to travel along with their liquifying, yummy, nutritious bodies~. UwU

Fluttershy plops into her bath and the snake wastes no time flooding it with even more potent acids. Alone, this one will digest quickly~ She's already starting to get a bit softer, and she's squirming and crying just a little bit. She'll calm down more soon. :3 The stomach growls happily. <3

Ms Snakie can still taste that delicious pegasus on her lips.. She moves silently, enjoying the hunt, salivating in anticipation of what's going to happen next..
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Story End
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coolblooded

Posted by coolblooded 7 months ago Report

Eat to many ponies and you will pop. :p nice pic!!!

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 7 months ago Report

Snakie gotta take her time and pace herself. :3 Luckily that just leaves more time for playing with her prey! >:3

kitty122

Posted by kitty122 7 months ago Report

Damn! Ms snake is gonna take quite a massive dump~

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 7 months ago Report

Gonna be a lot of ponies in there >:3c