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Tags: Ashley Jones baby prey Big Belly birth Blonde bones breaking Cruel Pred Cruelty to baby Digestion Disposal Evil evil pred Fatal giving birth Graphic birth Graphic digestion indian prey Multiple Preds Oral Vore Pooping Pregnancy pregnant pred Scat taunting teasing Twin twin prey Underage prey Unwilling Prey violations of the Hippocratic oath Watersports written work young prey Younger Prey
READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!!!
Warning this is the most extreme story I've ever written do not read it unless you are comfortable with extreme fictional cruelty warning.
an idea that percolated into my brain and that is the fault of several other people who inspired me and discussed ideas with me.
Nothing in this stories inspired by real life, all resemblance to any people real or imagined is coincidental.
this is the incredibly dark sequel to 1 of my first stories, as ever feedback hugely appreciated.
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Posted by ReiREND 7 months ago Report
"READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!!!
Warning this is the most extreme story I've ever written do not read it unless you are comfortable with extreme fictional cruelty warning."
Don't threaten me with a good time. i am diving in!
Posted by Trying124 7 months ago Report
well if that's the case I'm expecting feedback ;-) please do tell what you like what you didn't like!
Posted by Person955 7 months ago Report
Not the same guy, but this was easily one of the more extreme stories I've read. The whole abortion stuff was just really out of pocket. And of course cruelty...
Posted by Trying124 7 months ago Report
AW thanks! it was meant to be horrifically evil even if I understand why some people said there's more talking about evil than actually doing it.
Posted by ReiREND 7 months ago Report
just finished reading, the story is good, but tbh i feel like the actuall vore stuff was put to the side in exchange for cruelty talk, lotta talk about vore for a short vore scene, but idk, this is a sequel, might just be the intended effect :p, but i gobbled up the story anyway, good job! excited to see ur next works.
(btw i am really bad at expressing myself in english, idk which words to use, forgive me if anything i said sounds weird)
Posted by Trying124 6 months ago Report
thank you very much these were really terrific and detailed feedback I greatly appreciate it!
Posted by HMDVore 7 months ago Report
Woah
Posted by Trying124 7 months ago Report
Glad you like it!
Posted by Ascendingcard9 7 months ago Report
if you don't mind me asking what was this a sequel to
Posted by Trying124 7 months ago Report
my first Ashley Jones story in which she consumes his father after pretending to be pregnant because she's eaten the woman that Earl Jones cheated on her with.
Posted by Ascendingcard9 7 months ago Report
thank you
Posted by Raesetsu 7 months ago Report
Still need more of Rachel's new life. Want to see if she makes up with her husband or not :D
Posted by Trying124 6 months ago Report
the muse on that one is a little bit dead, but there's never a good time for necromancy
Posted by Welcometocave 7 months ago Report
A trying post and an augustin post. We eating good today!
Posted by Trying124 7 months ago Report
there is as much better but glad you enjoyed!
Posted by Ascendingcard9 7 months ago Report
this was awesome can't wait for the next chapter
Posted by Sitharc 6 months ago Report
Never enough brutal cruel child prey stuff.
Posted by Trying124 6 months ago Report
thank you so much!
Anything in particular that you enjoyed about this?
Posted by Jadeharleyzz 6 months ago Report
beautifulllll
Posted by Trying124 6 months ago Report
aw thanks! anything in particular you enjoyed about it?
Posted by Jadeharleyzz 6 months ago Report
I loved the premise of just the sheer cruelty of this woman, killing one of the most defenseless, powerless creatures in such a slow, gruesome way. I have a soft spot for infant prey lol, the more gruesome, the better.
it's very descriptive as well, going into every little detail...! it's so great and I honestly love your works cause of this.