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A very long time ago the remarkably talented Augustin published a period drama piece, and imitation being the sincerest form of flattery here's my own variation on the same theme.
I decided to write it in a slightly different method to my usual one little experimental so any feedback greatly appreciated.
As ever, lady Sofia Farcy, I appreciate all comments as my very vivacious muse in order to keep her voracious.
It's probably going to be my last story of the year, as I have a very busy couple of weeks ahead.
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Posted by HMDVore 5 months ago Report
interesting vore-ish take on these tropes. Nicely written.
Posted by Trying124 5 months ago Report
Thank you so much! Always lovely to get more feedback on my work. Thanks
Posted by JustAStargazer 5 months ago Report
I appreciated the unique style of the story. I feel you succeeded in making what you set out to with it.
The way in which she melted down her rival and how casually it was mentioned that servants and others would later be killed in passing was a rather nice touch to the cruelty already being displayed. Great work.
Posted by Trying124 5 months ago Report
Thank you so much! glad to hear you liked it!
Posted by ABoost 5 months ago Report
This was very good. I like preds like this. Will we get moee of her?
Posted by Trying124 5 months ago Report
Glad you liked her XD. I think most of my predators are relatively like him as for whether or not you'll get this specific predator again? I'm not a hundred percent sure yet maybe if I come up with a good idea for another story featuring her.