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First off, new, fun thing! I like to generate little character references/thumbnails before I write, to help me visualize the characters a bit. So I put those down just past the end of the story, if you want to see how I "pictured" the main character.
That said, here's a new story for you all! Following Claire, a young woman coming dangerously close to graduating high school, instead of being digested like she always wanted! Fortunately, there's someone around that can help her avoid such a tragedy~
A bit of prey POV for those that enjoy that sort of thing... though if you like butts and AV I think you'll enjoy it regardless :3
...I tried to make the title both an AV pun and a reference to Claire's "backstory" (not that there's much of that) so I hope that worked
Anyway, enjoy! Feel free to leave a comment! Hopefully I got all the tags this time, I fuckin forgot F/F on the last one and that was embarrassing as hell...
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Posted by IddlerItaler 6 months ago Report
Nice story. Judging by the ending picture, I feel like Tanya could be described as tan or olive-skinned, whereas I pictured her as darker due to the story's description.
Posted by PaperWriter 6 months ago Report
Yeahhhh she's a little light in there... I just grabbed a skin tone guide and picked the one that looked closest to me... I still not sure how close I was in the end but eh, it's written now, and people can imagine her as dark as they want to in reading ^^
Posted by Perodian 6 months ago Report
It's a wonder how any of these prey survive past graduation and contribute to society as something other than a meal...before eventually doing so.
Posted by PaperWriter 6 months ago Report
I mean, yeah... though I did consider a silly little post-credits-style scene of Alice coming back twenty years later, after legitimately dating that pred and living her life... buuuuut I just didn't do it in the end. Maybe she was the one that lived and maybe she got churned, it's up to the reader :)
Posted by voredrawing 6 months ago Report
Great read and just feels so natural and realistic! Love casual vore amazing stuff. Look forward to more similar:)
Posted by PaperWriter 6 months ago Report
Thank you! I'm very glad to hear that it felt natural, there were a few scenes that certainly didn't feel right the first time I tried writing them... glad they ended up better. ^^
Posted by Voredred 6 months ago Report
I love this story. The prey POV is great, the pacing was good. Absolutely love when the prey isn't only willing, but seeking out a Pred themselves.
Posted by PaperWriter 6 months ago Report
Thank you! I had to do some editing to get the pacing feeling right, so I'm especially hear that that paid off :)
The idea of a group of prey girls looking for preds to end up in seemed like such a hot idea, especially following the last of their group like this... very glad the random inspiration hit to make the story AV, or I feel like there would have been a much less fun reason for Claire to still be around, or to randomly pick this waitress she never met...